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HellRaiza · 06-24-2009, 08:03 PM

Looks good Wolf, But needs a better theme in my opinion...

Villyer · 06-24-2009, 08:08 PM

Your combined image is cropped wrong.
It shows two of the crane blocks next to each other.

What boxes are F?

You can camp under the spawns if you got in that crouch.
The outside refills are pointless IMO, gameplay seems more centered, due to lack of ladders on the outside.
I dont really like your use of tiles, the black crane blocks would look better if they were the same as the block their sitting on.
Use the decorative volcano tiles.

3/5

jfella91 · 06-24-2009, 10:05 PM

Gameplay looks interesting
I like the theme
I don't think the water tiles are fitting
I can see how the gameplay is designed and the map being open is part of that, but I think it's a little too open
I think the floating volcano tiles should be changed to something human-made looking, because then the bottom part would be like the moon and everything else would be built on top of that.
Refills in the middle could be placed better.
Overall, inventive and pretty cool.

I would rate 3.5/5 so far, if I could rate lol.

Wolfz · 06-24-2009, 10:33 PM

Water on Moon..?

Moon has no gravity..
-----------

RATE:

Due to uncertain reasons..

3/5..

Keep on making good maps >:]

Toxic · 06-24-2009, 10:39 PM

Very creative. (5/5)

Villyer · 06-24-2009, 10:40 PM

Dont listen to them.

I like the water.

StrikiNinja · 06-24-2009, 11:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wolfz

Water on Moon..?

Moon has no gravity..
-----------

RATE:

Due to uncertain reasons..

3/5..

Keep on making good maps >:]

The moon does have gravity. It's just what they call, "micro-gravity."

The map does look pretty nice.
Gameplay should be tested to see whether it's good or not.

3/5.

SeasonalTNT · 06-24-2009, 11:16 PM

One thing's gotta go: either the name or the water.
and I think it's a bit tight in the middle, where the refills are. As a matter of fact, I think you've got too many refills, imho.

And why is star rating 4 still? Three people here have voted 3/5. Was it you?

WolfHowlz · 06-24-2009, 11:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SeasonalTNT

One thing's gotta go: either the name or the water.
and I think it's a bit tight in the middle, where the refills are. As a matter of fact, I think you've got too many refills, imho.

And why is star rating 4 still? Three people here have voted 3/5. Was it you?

Water looks cool. If there's freaking water on Mars, there's water on the moon >_>

There's 4 refills. It's koo

06-24-2009, 07:58 PM	#1
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06-24-2009, 08:03 PM	#2
HellRaiza User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Satansville, Hell's City Clan Name: [PS] Pawn's Soldiers [A] Posts: 27	Looks good Wolf, But needs a better theme in my opinion... __________________

06-24-2009, 08:08 PM	#3
Villyer PT Map Making Team Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: United States Clan Name: TQC Posts: 3,120	Your combined image is cropped wrong. It shows two of the crane blocks next to each other. What boxes are F? You can camp under the spawns if you got in that crouch. The outside refills are pointless IMO, gameplay seems more centered, due to lack of ladders on the outside. I dont really like your use of tiles, the black crane blocks would look better if they were the same as the block their sitting on. Use the decorative volcano tiles. 3/5 __________________ Bridge CTF (Thanks Garbage) Last edited by Villyer; 06-24-2009 at 08:22 PM..

06-24-2009, 10:05 PM	#4
jfella91 PG Map Making Team Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: I live in Canada eh?? 1337: Yes Clan Name: PND Posts: 1,343	Gameplay looks interesting I like the theme I don't think the water tiles are fitting I can see how the gameplay is designed and the map being open is part of that, but I think it's a little too open I think the floating volcano tiles should be changed to something human-made looking, because then the bottom part would be like the moon and everything else would be built on top of that. Refills in the middle could be placed better. Overall, inventive and pretty cool. I would rate 3.5/5 so far, if I could rate lol. __________________ "We roll 'em fat like that Oprah b-" Last edited by jfella91; 06-24-2009 at 11:10 PM..

06-24-2009, 10:33 PM	#5
Wolfz User Join Date: May 2009 Location: 5 Star Motel with 5 Star Gourmet Restaurant with its very own amusement park.. Bet thats cool.. Clan Name: None.. Posts: 325	Water on Moon..? Moon has no gravity.. ----------- RATE: Due to uncertain reasons.. 3/5.. Keep on making good maps >:] __________________ \|Rep Me\| I'll Rep Bck!\|

06-24-2009, 10:39 PM	#6
Toxic Pawn Assistant Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: #Lounge-Pawn Forums Clan Name: Clan Manager Posts: 841	Very creative. (5/5) __________________ If you need help with anything Clan related, such as starting one, or needs help managing one, just Private Message me, and I will be sure to help you. Click Here For more information of starting a Clan Thread.

06-24-2009, 10:40 PM	#7
Villyer PT Map Making Team Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: United States Clan Name: TQC Posts: 3,120	Dont listen to them. I like the water. __________________ Bridge CTF (Thanks Garbage)

06-24-2009, 11:16 PM	#9
SeasonalTNT PG Map Making Team Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Earth Clan Name: Clan Name: Posts: 1,177	One thing's gotta go: either the name or the water. and I think it's a bit tight in the middle, where the refills are. As a matter of fact, I think you've got too many refills, imho. And why is star rating 4 still? Three people here have voted 3/5. Was it you? __________________

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