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M · 02-20-2009, 08:27 AM

I used this map to enter the February Map Rush.
I think this is my best assault ever.
Rate and give suggestion.

Snoopy · 02-20-2009, 10:19 AM

- spawns are a little bland

- Jungle on Castle?

-Top is ok

Killerrrrrr · 02-20-2009, 04:21 PM

- Ladder mixing between Urban and Space...

- Tile flow isn't that great

- Grass on Castle

- You could of made of a little more space in the middle bottom. There's kind of too much Castle tiles...

Hamo · 02-21-2009, 04:51 AM

OK..

Botum part of the red spawn side needs major fixing. Try make it jungle tile as well it makes it look a bit better. Also it is farely open.
Remove refills near red spawn...that just attracts camping.
I would say max of 3 refills on this map and you should move them, the spots there in now are bad.
Personly i think you have used to many tiles and have lost tile flow so it looks a bit dodgy. Maybe make it just about all jungle and see how it looks then.
Space tile platforms right in front of arti look like crap remove them.
In the blue base maybe add a few windows or pictures.

Try making all bar blue base jungle.And grass doesn't crow on bricks of boxes.

Shadowreaver · 02-21-2009, 08:14 AM

Most of the reasons are said.
Try not to have grass on castle...
Better refill placement
I see quite a lot of stairs game play... not really enjoyable.

But you covered the *lits of not to do*
2/5

Chickletman · 08-09-2009, 03:28 PM

It's an okay assault

I think the artifact room and red spawn areas could be better worked. Wasted a lot of space in the red area and didn't use enough for the artifact

Rated 2.5/5
★★★★★

02-20-2009, 08:27 AM	#1
M User Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Island Clan Name: CIA member! Posts: 826	[8 votes] Jungle Wars [1.88] I used this map to enter the February Map Rush. I think this is my best assault ever. Rate and give suggestion. __________________ NightMare333 For Mod! Last edited by M; 02-20-2009 at 09:00 AM..

02-20-2009, 10:19 AM	#2
Snoopy PG Map Making Team Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: I'm On a Boat Clan Name: Modern Day Heroes Posts: 1,226	- spawns are a little bland - Jungle on Castle? -Top is ok __________________ Charlie Brown Raped Me! Cheers to Damixnarai for the epic sig.

02-20-2009, 04:21 PM	#3
Killerrrrrr Tournament Director Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: New Brunswick, Canada Objectives: Become the best map maker ever :D Clan Name: [THH] - The Hacker Hunter Posts: 2,888	- Ladder mixing between Urban and Space... - Tile flow isn't that great - Grass on Castle - You could of made of a little more space in the middle bottom. There's kind of too much Castle tiles... __________________ My Map Hall

02-21-2009, 04:51 AM	#4
Hamo Clan Manager Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Australia Clan Name: Wombat? Posts: 5,291	OK.. Botum part of the red spawn side needs major fixing. Try make it jungle tile as well it makes it look a bit better. Also it is farely open. Remove refills near red spawn...that just attracts camping. I would say max of 3 refills on this map and you should move them, the spots there in now are bad. Personly i think you have used to many tiles and have lost tile flow so it looks a bit dodgy. Maybe make it just about all jungle and see how it looks then. Space tile platforms right in front of arti look like crap remove them. In the blue base maybe add a few windows or pictures. Try making all bar blue base jungle.And grass doesn't crow on bricks of boxes. __________________

02-21-2009, 08:14 AM	#5
Shadowreaver PG Map Making Team Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Bermuda Clan Name: (T.e.M) Posts: 1,268	Most of the reasons are said. Try not to have grass on castle... Better refill placement I see quite a lot of stairs game play... not really enjoyable. But you covered the lits of not to do 2/5 __________________ Need mazing help? Go to http://pawngame.com/forum/showthread.php?t=81766 Need maze guides? Go to http://pawngame.com/forum/showthread.php?t=52361 http://pawngame.com/forum/showthread.php?t=73529 .:Shadowreaver Map Locker:.

08-09-2009, 03:28 PM	#6
Chickletman User Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 7,351	It's an okay assault I think the artifact room and red spawn areas could be better worked. Wasted a lot of space in the red area and didn't use enough for the artifact Rated 2.5/5 ★★★★★ __________________ I'm not offended by homosexuality. In the 60's, I made love to many, many women. Often outdoors... in the mud and the rain. And it's possible a man slipped in. There would be no way of knowing.

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