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medalkiller
12-25-2008, 04:12 AM
A new map I made.
My first 1x1 map.

Name:Industrial Fort
Size:1x1
Background:3 (space/night)
http://i44.tinypic.com/152j4ux.jpg
How is it?
All boxes are F,so no crouches in map.
Rate/Hate/Suggest :D

Hurrikhayne11
12-25-2008, 04:20 AM
Looks like a rip from DP's map..
Whatever though... I guess.


Touching refills.
Refills too close.
Too tight.
Plain.

I really don't like. 1/5

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 04:23 AM
Looks like a rip from DP's map..
Whatever though... I guess.


Touching refills.
Refills too close.
Too tight.
Plain.

I really don't like. 1/5

Its not a rip of DP's map..
and if you say touching refills,you don't need to repeat it by saying "Refills too close."
Whats a tight map?
Its not plain too.

Hurrikhayne11
12-25-2008, 04:25 AM
Its not a rip of DP's map..
and if you say touching refills,you don't need to repeat it by saying "Refills too close."
Whats a tight map?
Its not plain too.
Don't argue with me; it looks like a bad remake of it.
Because I wanted to be clear you should spread them out.
Tight map is exactly how it sounds; it has hardly any movement to it.
Now stop being such a noob and take the advice.. gah.

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 04:31 AM
Don't argue with me; it looks like a bad remake of it.
Because I wanted to be clear you should spread them out.
Tight map is exactly how it sounds; it has hardly any movement to it.
Now stop being such a noob and take the advice.. gah.

If a map is tight where it has hardly places to move..
How do you say my map is plain if it has hardly any places to move?

Paulcow
12-25-2008, 09:51 AM
Looks like a rip from DP's map..
Whatever though... I guess.


Touching refills.
Refills too close.
Too tight.
Plain.

I really don't like. 1/5

Hit it right on the nail
Keep trying dude one day... well idk... lol

XD99
12-25-2008, 10:07 AM
needs more room
ammo refills is a must spread them out
lots of places to get heads shots(only good thing i see)

xXBiOhAzOrDXx
12-25-2008, 10:08 AM
Looks like a rip from DP's map..
Whatever though... I guess.


Touching refills.
Refills too close.
Too tight.
Plain.

I really don't like. 1/5

Yep yep,true true... needs a little work.....

xXBiOhAzOrDXx
12-25-2008, 10:11 AM
Its not a rip of DP's map..
and if you say touching refills,you don't need to repeat it by saying "Refills too close."
Whats a tight map?
Its not plain too.

Try not to use the oppion of others as a bad thing,but constructively to help you to your advange

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 10:13 AM
Hit it right on the nail
Keep trying dude one day... well idk... lol
Its not plain!!!Look at map almost everything is used.God.

needs more room
ammo refills is a must spread them out
lots of places to get heads shots(only good thing i see)
its 1x1 can't do more rooms..if you mean plain so your wrong..Its not plain look at map closly.

Yep yep,true true... needs a little work.....
You even didn't look at my map,you just quoted him and said yep,yep,true.
So your completly wrong..Its not plain.

xXBiOhAzOrDXx
12-25-2008, 10:17 AM
Its not plain!!!Look at map almost everything is used.God.


its 1x1 can't do more rooms..if you mean plain so your wrong..Its not plain look at map closly.


You even didn't look at my map,you just quoted him and said yep,yep,true.
So your completly wrong..Its not plain.

Your still doing the same thingLOOK AT THE WORDS...meaning your only looking at what we told you that you need to fix...Look at it more constructively OK

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 10:20 AM
Your still doing the same thingLOOK AT THE WORDS...meaning your only looking at what we told you that you need to fix...Look at it more constructively OK

I look at the words..And I ask:What do I see?
And I answer:A wrong problem saying its plain but its not.
If you still think its plain,come to chat,I'll show you it isn't.

xXBiOhAzOrDXx
12-25-2008, 10:30 AM
I look at the words..And I ask:What do I see?
And I answer:A wrong problem saying its plain but its not.
If you still think its plain,come to chat,I'll show you it isn't.

This is a "forum" you chat about things,make diffrent opinions about things,or even get help with things..If you didnt want you map opinionated than you should'nt asked are opinions or even brought it to the forum in that case =P.

Soul
12-25-2008, 10:41 AM
It is plain. Plain just means repetitive and pointless. You didn't change up your tiles so it's plain. Also if you look closely and remove the stuff that you can't get to it IS plain.

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 11:31 AM
It is plain. Plain just means repetitive and pointless. You didn't change up your tiles so it's plain. Also if you look closely and remove the stuff that you can't get to it IS plain.

oh,I though plain means alot of unused space.
Sorry xXBiOhAzOrDXx
but it doesn't have alot of unused sapce I ment.

Killah
12-25-2008, 12:16 PM
Looks like a rip from DP's map..
Whatever though... I guess.


Touching refills.
Refills too close.
Too tight.
Plain.

I really don't like. 1/5

Agreed, and it does look like a rip of dp's map.

Dpballer
12-25-2008, 12:26 PM
Enough of the flaming. It's the holidays.

Medal try making a map without my layout. I'm saying this nicely. It's good that you tried it though. Try using more detail and try to make it so every gameplay intersection is evenly spaced out. Refills are bad to put in open areas. Doesn't really give you a chance. Only use pit tiles if your entering another space like in june outside to inside. Never use that Industrial tiles that are glass. They are flat out ugly and take away appearence. Never use crouched up areas that you can't reach. It uses useful space that could be used. Try to use more types of CF blocks so like have industrial and space or urban and canopy. Combos make maps look good. Just have to be able to use combos and have good gameplay at same time.

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 12:33 PM
Agreed, and it does look like a rip of dp's map.
Your really wrong..
This is Dp's map:
http://i39.tinypic.com/24epdtz.png

Enough of the flaming. It's the holidays.

Medal try making a map without my layout. I'm saying this nicely. It's good that you tried it though. Try using more detail and try to make it so every gameplay intersection is evenly spaced out. Refills are bad to put in open areas. Doesn't really give you a chance. Only use pit tiles if your entering another space like in june outside to inside. Never use that Industrial tiles that are glass. They are flat out ugly and take away appearence. Never use crouched up areas that you can't reach. It uses useful space that could be used. Try to use more types of CF blocks so like have industrial and space or urban and canopy. Combos make maps look good. Just have to be able to use combos and have good gameplay at same time.
Hmm,So you want me to add more kind of tiles?
Most of the places in my map you can get too.
oh well,then I'll remove the pits.
And I have no room for canopy..lol.
Thanks too.

Leonardo
12-25-2008, 12:36 PM
Eh...



Plain
Boring
Crouches, fine, just less than 2
Drop camp (sides)

I think that's all.

Also, Medalkiller's map isn't a rip of DPs... DPs is a rip of Lights Out. Lol

medalkiller
12-25-2008, 12:40 PM
Eh...



Plain
Boring
Crouches, fine, just less than 2
Drop camp (sides)

I think that's all.

Also, Medalkiller's map isn't a rip of DPs... DPs is a rip of Lights Out. Lol

Thank god for being smart because its NOT a rip from DP.
I don't think drop sides is camping spots...I was supposed to make it for hiding. D:
Lawl,fine I'll add more tiles to make it not plain. xD

Leonardo
12-25-2008, 12:43 PM
Lol, I got my map deleted since it has drop camps. D:

Also, put tiles on the top part of the map.

FusiouS
12-25-2008, 02:07 PM
hmm not bad
I don't like the crouches
I don't like the tileflow
spawn camping

bad refill placement

RESULTS:
2/5

xXBiOhAzOrDXx
12-25-2008, 04:00 PM
oh,I though plain means alot of unused space.
Sorry xXBiOhAzOrDXx
but it doesn't have alot of unused sapce I ment.

IT'S BORING,get over it,make a new one.... You have close to four to five people saying its plain.And honestly its probably not that bad...BUT you keep pushing the issuse,like you have gold of something....If we dont like it,than change your ways, and make a new one....

Hurrikhayne11
12-25-2008, 04:34 PM
So you are telling me that you argued/trolled all of these people's opinions for your map; you will not get any better by not accepting it.

Does http://i44.tinypic.com/152j4ux.jpg NOT look like http://i39.tinypic.com/24epdtz.png ?
I think it does, accept the fact you ripped. -.-...

Chickletman
12-25-2008, 04:36 PM
I don't think it's a rip, it's not even a good map :D

gunerysergent
12-25-2008, 04:37 PM
There are only a couple things with this one:


Touching refills
Kinda flat
3/5
70%
Looks like the game play would be kinda like a quick draw, but with refills, I think iw ould like to play it.

BoomSticker
12-25-2008, 05:34 PM
Nice for a 1x1 but touching refils makes the whole map ugly. 3/5

medalkiller
12-26-2008, 04:51 AM
So you are telling me that you argued/trolled all of these people's opinions for your map; you will not get any better by not accepting it.

Does http://i44.tinypic.com/152j4ux.jpg NOT look like http://i39.tinypic.com/24epdtz.png ?
I think it does, accept the fact you ripped. -.-...

First,I didn't argue with all of this people.
You even didn't read the thread.
And you can see even chickletman and iFreak says its not a rip,and they are pro map makers.Because its not a rip.