A leapard map (2)

[laughingleapard]

I was told that my maps were to cramped, so this is my wider style map. I need some help on the room with the artifact in it and also the blue spawn points. Any other pointers would also be liked.

Keep in the mind the bricks are foreground in the building
1551

[MasterKillerGOD]

Mhmm.


Im glad to see that you listen to what we
say..


For this map i would suggest taking out
the maze jumps, Now that you have widend
your maps up try to add some intersting
game play designs, like blocks, drops, etc.


Your visual style is shakey, i would
also suggest trying to make things fit
and flow some more..

I do not wish to rate this map because
it seems to need many improvements...

If you would kindly post an updated version
with all the things fixed that i just told you
about, i will gladly rate it then.

[Leonardo]

Looks good from far.. O_O
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[laughingleapard]

Alright my revised version
1552

Tell me what you think, I think it flows better, but Im not the expert. I still need help with blue spawn point placements

[FusiouS]

no image yo O_o

[laughingleapard]

What do you mean? No image?

[FusiouS]

lack of space used
cramped
spawn camp

RESULTS:
2/5

[RaptorZ]

repetitive, thats the main thing
too much unused space on the top
i give it a 1.5/5

[medalkiller]

Plain.
Even more plain at top.
Mazing tricks.
easy assault.
1.5/5