Map Help

[HeyNoob]

Yo guys this is my first map so i wud like some help and also b nice XD... i wud like 2 kno wut i shud add/take away and wat i shud put for the background.. wat ever u say that isn't ripping on the map saying it sucks and stuff is much appreciated.

[HeyNoob]

arg, can any1 tell me how to put it in a reply thing...

[Hurrikhayne11]

I demand to know where this map is located.

[HeyNoob]

well idk how 2 post it in this.. im a huge noob on forums

[Hurrikhayne11]

Upload your screen shot at http://www.tinypic.com (http://www.tinypic.com/) and post the IMG code here.

[HeyNoob]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2vm7zbc.jpg

[Hurrikhayne11]

Not bad for a first.. Just fix these notes I'm going to list.


Touching ladders.
Too many reffils.
Epic spawn camping.
Bad tile flow. (You'll learn about this later)
Flat.

Seems fun too.. Just improve a bit more.
1/5

[HeyNoob]

mmkay thanks ill post a edited version.. hmm but another question.. wut u mean by flat.. like i dont kno wut 2 add 2 make it less flat :S..

[Hurrikhayne11]

What I mean by flat is that it's just plainly walking.
Have stuff to hide behind and jump over and such.

[HeyNoob]

better or worse?

http://i41.tinypic.com/rw5c3q.jpg

[BoomSticker]

Its better than most peoples first map ever ever. I rate it at 5/10.