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[hhhhhhholmes]

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z212/hhhhhhholmes/TheSmokecopy.png
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z212/hhhhhhholmes/TheSmokecopy2.png

[KILLERNOOBKAKE]

I like the first one, other than the coloring on the girl. It's really bad over the girl, but i like it on the bg.

[airsoftman03]

I personally like the second because the first one is too colorful

[blondie]

Smooth it out with topaz or surface blur. I like the left side.

[Skuhl]

1st is good. depth would be nice tho

[CRYSTGANGSTER]

I like v2 the best.
Id say also remove the brushing or smudging over the focal.

[M1dnightCobra]

yup..1st...

liquifying could be better...on the left anywyas...

like the fx and colors but the focal could be cleaned a bit better..

i mean it looks too fake...lol