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KILLERNOOBKAKE
11-29-2008, 12:48 PM
Well i don't like this one that much, but i wanted some cnc to see where i went wrong..

http://i37.tinypic.com/2cqi174.png

CnC

Edit: Here's the WIP until the part that i went wrong. Please voice any ideas that i can do to the left side.

http://i37.tinypic.com/am6wbo.png
wut
11-29-2008, 12:53 PM
Eww.

Seriously.

Eww.
KILLERNOOBKAKE
11-29-2008, 01:01 PM
CnC? i want to see where i went wrong. It was good until i added the left side lol.
wut
11-29-2008, 01:27 PM
The left side kills the flow and colors.
M1dnightCobra
11-29-2008, 04:21 PM
left side does kill it..

nice liquifying..if it is liqufying..

wat cp said..


and lighting..
KILLERNOOBKAKE
11-29-2008, 06:02 PM
It's not liquifying. It was sourghta c4d and sourghta pen tooling lol. I couldn't think of anything to do on the left so i came up with that and didn't like it... i'll show u guys the wip that i had nd ask for ideas.
M1dnightCobra
11-29-2008, 06:07 PM
looks better...but its plain still..
KILLERNOOBKAKE
11-29-2008, 06:09 PM
Any ideas? i'm just uninspired right now lol.
CRYSTGANGSTER
11-29-2008, 10:18 PM
Updated one is better.
Colors are good imo.
Focal pentooling is bad.
COuld have more effects
Gj. though
M1dnightCobra
11-29-2008, 10:20 PM
add more pentooling...

and a nice abstract c4d render behind the focal..