View Full Version : Jungle Spirit (First 2x2)
The is my first 2x2 so yay :D hope you like. PLEASE rate and give feedback. Simply reviewing without points is dare I say...Pointless? Pun intended.
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff198/rscraze/2X2.jpg
Albireo
11-18-2008, 09:38 PM
Problems:
Not symmetrical
Forgot some grass, and some tall grass in some places
The entire top left corner is incomplete
The red moss is only in certain sections
Very long ladders
I would change the urban gray background tiles to the darker space BG tiles
Bad refill location
Simple decorating
Plain
You just made a 1 x 2, and put it twice on a 2 x 2 map
Tight
Leonardo
11-18-2008, 09:41 PM
I really like your creativity. :)
But middle is abit too symmetrical. Loosen it up abit. Base is fine, just put abit of detail like the windows in Urban.
Problems:
Not symmetrical
(Uhh only the grass isn't symmetrical that won't effect gameplay)
Forgot some grass, and some tall grass in some places
(I don't think that detracts so much from the fun
The entire top left corner is incomplete
(Again that's only in terms of decoration)
The red moss is only in certain sections
(That isn't what you have to do on EVERY single block)
Very long ladders
(That I admit I can shave those down in V2)
I would change the urban gray background tiles to the darker space BG tiles
(Will do thanks :) )
Bad refill location
(Eh, I can change that in V2 when I get some more feedback)
Simple decorating
(Now see I don't really care since I'm focusing on the gameplay
Plain
(Indeed)
You just made a 1 x 2, and put it twice on a 2 x 2 map
(Indeed)
Please do not feel offended by my response I'm only explaining not flaming.
EDIT: Thanks Ifreak, Although I do feel rather like I copied most other maps in my design of the playing blocks.
watsurface
11-18-2008, 09:45 PM
*Plain
*Ladders are too long
*Lots of ladder camping
*Forgot some things
Keep working and you will get better.
I suggest reading the map making guide.
Lol, Everyone says that even if the maps fine. (I've had pre-tests with my friends) Although I don't really like decorating I'm more into perfecting the gameplay.
quickkillerz
11-18-2008, 10:09 PM
Tight
Tile flow isn't good.
Plain and boring
Gameplay would be the same.
Leonardo
11-18-2008, 10:10 PM
No problem. Just put another way to go out of the spawns so theres no spawn camp. :)
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