new map

[Dayo]

what do you think before you flame i just made it so plz tell me were it could be better

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/my%20maps/mapppp.jpg

[Dayo]

Another map

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/my%20maps/base.jpg

[Dayo]

well what do ppl think?

[Balmung]

I think triple hosting is bad.

I also think think that the maps are worth ignoring this thread for. >.>'

Problems:


Crouches
Tight places
Flat
You're obsessed with that type of map (the looks)
Bad refill positions
Bad spawn locations.
Floating spawns
Ladder duck jumping
Blocks cross instead of going horizontally or vertically
Random industrial tiles
The windows are very plain the way you used them
Too many clouds
Jump to get to ladders
Very plain maps

Read the guide, get advice from MMT, look at MMT's maps, not the normal user's maps, since most aren't good, etc. Too much help is out there for you, although it's up to you to find it.

[quickkillerz]

-flat
-spawns are badly placed
- ammo crates are adly placed
-looks boring

[Leonardo]

Middle is fine, left and right sides suck.
Dont use urban boxes as a walkway, they look like they're floating.
Use the Space tiles you know those rivets thing? Poles? Use those if it's a theme inside.

[Brandon0104]

I rate the first one 5/10 middle is great I just think left and right sides have to much free space. I just don't really like the sides.

I'll rate the second one 6.5/10 because I think there are too many ladders.

There still worth playing.

~Brandon~

[Hamo]

Erm The tiles go well together in a way but the way you set it out kinda is bad. Try working on gamplay and positions to put certain tiles.

[OmegaLemming]

what do you think before you flame i just made it so plz tell me were it could be better

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/my%20maps/mapppp.jpg

Like Hamo said please don't post more than one map in a thread in the future, thank you.

1st map:

- Don't put floating spawns, unless you want to glitch out like you're in a maze.
- Not very creative towards the outside, do something different with the boxes on the far left and right, they look dull just floating flatly in midair.
- Ladders leading out of spawn areas touch the ceiling, you should make them just one tile higher than the place you're trying to reach.
- Refill boxes are ridiculously close together, should be place much further apart.
- Vary up the look of the map in general to make it unique or at least more challenging to get around in, to make battles more interesting.

Good points:
- Symmetrical.
- Decent window placement.
- Decent cloud scattering, although you could get rid of a few to make it less cloudy (unless you like it that way).
- Visible attempt to reduce spawn camping, though you may want to do something a little different.

2nd map:

- No spawn camping reduction at all.
- Again, the refill boxes are too close, move them further apart.
- You could reduce number of ladder by making some longer, while moving floor tiles.
- Pretty standard looking, isn't too unique.

Good points:
- Cool brick layout in the background.
- Underground theme, nice.
- Drop and Hide locations (some of them) never seen that before. Looks cool.


It looks like you're really new to map-making, and when I was starting off in Pawn that's about how my maps looked as well.

You should get an expert map-maker to give you tips and I'm sure you'll be making killer maps in no time.

[Dayo]

kk ill get to work on V2

[duh13]

Do you see that button on the bottem right of your post that says edit?
USE IT, INSTEAD OF TRIPLE POSTING!!!

And just like they said, there's tons of problems with your maps.

[Dayo]

Here is V2 - both merged!

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/my%20maps/untitled.jpg

Do you see that button on the bottem right of your post that says edit?
USE IT, INSTEAD OF TRIPLE POSTING!!!

oh thanx didnt see that

And just like they said, there's tons of problems with your maps.

thats why im making V2

[Brandon0104]

Thats better. Id play that for sure. Just try and make less tight game play and reduce the camping spots. Either then that I think it's fine. You should post the code so I can see what it's like actually playing it.

~Brandon~

[Dayo]

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[Bally]

1st sucks but the 2nd is better than the 1st.

3/5 or 5/10

the 3rd FTW!

[Dayo]

im gona start V3 shortly

- Bottom will be made better
- Less camping spots
- Refils moved to better locations

[OmegaLemming]

Wow, good work Dayo! The third map looks fantastic!

All and all you did a good job of putting it all together :D

[Chickletman]

Cool looking map(The 3rd one)

Still plenty of simple problems

[Dayo]

Cool looking map(The 3rd one)

Still plenty of simple problems

all will be sorted in V3 but feel free to tell me more

Wow, good work Dayo! The third map looks fantastic!

All and all you did a good job of putting it all together :D

Thanx, :]

[Brandon0104]

I Tried The Map it's great except for on the bottom of the top left and top right screens you screen jump. You also screen jump on the top of the bottom middle screen.

Try it and check those places you will see what I mean.

I think you should make it so you can't see the bottom right and left screen during gameplay.

[Nightmare]

i dont particularly like the top corners, they dont blend well with the rest of the map at all...

[Dayo]

in V4 ill make the sides better maby make the factory extend along the whole top

[Killah]

-Flat
-Spawn camping
-Too many ladders
2.5/5 for both.

[xf1uffyx3]

the middle is fine but the sides need work x.x

[kingralph100]

i dont realy like the 1st one: 2/5
The 2nd one is better needs improvement tho: 3/5

[Dayo]

-Flat
-Spawn camping
-Too many ladders
2.5/5 for both.


look at the new 1 you have read the 1st post
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/my%20maps/untitled.jpg