warehouse strike

[Dayo]

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/map3.png

yes i know there is a similar name i didnt know till i tested it out


and this one

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/MAP4-1.png

[CMD1]

Looks nice. I give it a 4.5/5

[Dayo]

thanx can it be ne better? if so how

[KiteRider]

...nice attempt at a 2x1
2/5
-Really easy to camp the spawns, refill, and get back to camping
-Bad refill placement, probably a spot in the upper left/right corners would be better.
-Ladders touching
-Lots of empty space, even if it is a 2x1
-Crouch jumps D=

FYI, the watermark on top of the map is...kinda annoying...

[Dayo]

this better???

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/map3-1.png

[kingralph100]

I like it but... ya what they said its not the best but i like the disign and stuff 2.5/5

[Killah]

V2 version is much better, v2 is probably a 3.5/5

[MasterMe]

deathly reminds me of arena...it seems so many peopel try to rip of arena to make it better...theyve all failed

[Dayo]

im gona do some more to make it better tonite, what do you think i should do to it?

[MasterMe]

use some of the metal urban blocks...umm keep it at the demsion u have it at right now...

[gunerysergent]

Looks nice, but the words kinda got in my way instead of the map.

[Dayo]

HERE IS THE UPDATED VERSION WHAT DO YOU THINK

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/MAP4.png

soz about the caps i just relised

[MasterMe]

better...there is still some open space...extend the ladders that seem to be floating in mid air down so we can get up. where you have the two refil boxes at the top, make the walkthrough boxes solid. and probly make all the boxes solid that are in the top 2 sections...

[Dayo]

kk here is what i done with ur surgestion
http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/MAP4-1.png

[Leonardo]

Oo.. nice map. Show me how to do that big font lettering! :D
Btw, the map is abit weird. Dont use too many F Boxes, and its so plain there's only 1 way to walk through, which give us situations like camping.

[spamband]

aloooooooottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt lot lot lot lot lot lot better than the original.

[Dayo]

thank you :)

[gunerysergent]

Yeah, nice update, 4/5.

[MasterMe]

lol u fixed some of it....the ladders in the bottom half of the map...make them come all the way down to where they are almost touching the spawns...and just take out all the F boxes in the middle top part and replace them with solid boxes

[Dayo]

the ladders are like that so only the people from the top can get into that place to camp and ill make those solid now

[gunerysergent]

Still kinda to many of the refills, update it some more, take out the top two ammo boxes.

[Dayo]

here you go then

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/MAP4-3.png

[gunerysergent]

Awsome! Now, 5/5.

[Dayo]

thanx, ill make another map tomorow

[Dayo]

here is the game code if ne1 wants it

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[gunerysergent]

Hey, why did you put the white lines around the walk through boxes, anyways?

[Dayo]

otherwise you wouldent know what ones were solid and what ones wernt so reli it would just look like a box in some areas and i just relised i missed out the white line the four arrows on the bottom left screen

[gunerysergent]

Oh, ok. Next time, point it out so I can know. Keep up the good work in map making.

[Dayo]

it is pointed out look at the bottom of the map :D

[gunerysergent]

Oh, lol. I didn't know that. Now I see it.

[Peanuts]

eek its pretty good..was it your first maps.?!?!

[MasterMe]

you finally got it...it looks good

[gunerysergent]

I like the updates better than the first one he posted, hey peanut, which one do you like?

[Dayo]

kk, well im gona watch a movie ive been on PG for 12 hours making maps and testing them :D

[gunerysergent]

Hot many maps have you made so far?

[Dayo]

that was my 4th

[gunerysergent]

How many have you made so far?

[Dayo]

i have only made 4 so far :P

[gunerysergent]

Oh, lol I though you made more but put that one in slot 4. Well, can you post your' first one please. I justw ant to see them.

[Dayo]

kk there crap tho :P give us a sec

[gunerysergent]

Ok, I'll be looking and waiting for the thread to be updated with your' new old maps.

[Dayo]

here they are .... dont lagh too much :P

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/Untitled-4-3.png

i override the other one by mistake i now have 2 of my warehouse assults :S but its still better cos you wont have too much to laugh at :P

[gunerysergent]

Hey, those are ok, but you need to take up more space. They are kinda blank. 3/5 for both, that's like a 50%. An F but it's better than a 0.

[watsurface]

Get rid of the crouches.
The gameplay doesn't look that good in my point of view.
Also there is alot of unused space that should have been used.

[Dayo]

kk cool ill do a bit to them tomorow .... my comp is to slow to run the game .... i have to wait till my dad goes so i can use his comp. but soon im upgrading my comp and im gona set it up so i can use two monitors from 1 tower so i can play and make maps ... or just make two maps at once :P

any way im going to bed its 23:15 here and im nakered

[gunerysergent]

Let's us try them out later ok. All of them I mean, not just one. I need to see for myself if they area good gameplay, not just guess.

[Dayo]

well i posted the code back there somewere maby page 3/4 try it out :] kk i reli g2g now b4 i colapse on my keyboard zzz

[MasterMe]

lol a couple more maps like the one you updated you may have a chance at map making team

[Puffer]

The newest version looks pretty fun.

[jjv22]

i like them both i think it would be fun.5/5