Strikingup's new map

[watsurface]

All credit goes to Strikingup.
Rate/Hate his map and also provide suggestions. He is a beginner map maker so please give helpful advice.

http://i33.tinypic.com/fp8f0l.jpg

Here is the code

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Updated

http://i37.tinypic.com/2wcikn4.jpg

[Leonardo]

Wow. Creativity points there!
I like the floating theme.
Just 2 things, its plain and boring. Add color to it.

[NuMbA]

i think its pretty good but he could use all the empty spaces outside and a few more things inside

[StrikiNinja]

I guess I didnt copy it correctly, but ignore the empty ugly spaces.
Also, thank you WaTSuRFacE for posting

[watsurface]

No problem, the map has good gameplay even with those empty spaces.

[Hyjal]

Plain, Map has Too many Refills, 1 or 2 Would be Enough if Settled in a Good place, and Red'S Spawn, if Jumped to other Side, can Be stuck in a Trap, which you Cant Get out, and it has plain Areas, in a point
But good for a Beginner

7.5/10

[Peanuts]

Wow. Creativity points there!
I like the floating theme.
Just 2 things, its plain and boring. Add color to it.
yea the background is kinda boring...
but other than that good job!

[MasterKillerGOD]

Not bad.



It seems a bit frantic and plain..

But i like your idea's on gameplay...


I would suggest redoing some aeras
like the one to the arti and the blue
spawn aeras..

.:Over All:.
3.5/5

[MasterMe]

I playe don another map of his just a bit ago. it was a very small destroy the artifact match, and it was very interesting on what he did to make it so.
This map is different. i like the loating idea. um do add some color and maybe add some platforms taht you can jump on and shoot from where there is that open "cavern"

[FireSpark]

Good for a begginer
* To much refils
* Bad gameplay
* Flat
* Red disadvantage
5/10 :eek:

[kj446]

It looks good but tell him to add some color to it but other than
that it looks good.

[watsurface]

Good for a begginer
* To much refils
* Bad gameplay
* Flat
* Red disadvantage
5/10 :eek:

Actually when we were playing the blue kinda had the disadvantage and there was good gameplay.

[EduardoIceddude]

Good for a begginer
* To much refils
* Bad gameplay
* Flat
* Red disadvantage
5/10 :eek:

its called assault.

[kingralph100]

it looks fun but it needs color its like from the 1800s lol all black and white lol but good id give it 4/5

[MasterMe]

lol i just caught this... if you spawn from the high right red spawn you kinda have it easy to the artifact. i mean you go down the ladder. walk left like 10 paces drop down a hole...run like hell and your there. so while blue is kill all the other red ppl you just slip on by...

[Tayl0rl0ve]

Yeah i've played it. Great gameplay.
5/5

Code please?

[watsurface]

Code posted.

[gunerysergent]

It's good, but try to take up more space. Because, if you go all the way tot he left or all the way to the right, you will keep falling and then won't be able to be back up, because the whole bottom tiles are blank.

[quickkillerz]

On the top right red spawn, if you jump to the right side of the building, there is a hole.

If you go through it and fall, you are screwed.

[watsurface]

Keep posting your advice everybody.
Strikingup wants all the advice he can get to update his map.

[gunerysergent]

And when exactlly will he be updating it?

[Rank]

when ever he feals like it

[watsurface]

He will be updating it when he is ready to update it.

[Tayl0rl0ve]

Thanks for code!

[watsurface]

Thanks for code!

No problem.

[StrikiNinja]

I see you posted my updated version, thank you everyone for your help.

[Puffer]

Good for a beginner map.

Make a better use of space next time.

[Shadowreaver]

I played the updated version and it was nice good flow and background 4.5/5