My 1st map

[Dayo]

what do you think?

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/map-1.png

[Corruption3]

I like it.At the top of the map the tile flow looks good.
(But at the bottom it just needs a little bit more work on the
tile flow.)

[PieDude]

too many refills

[HellsRazor]

Too open,Too long ladders,too many refills,crouches,...
Read the map making guide and make more maps.
3/5 because it's your first map. =]

[watsurface]

A lot of unused space, too many refills, and it needs to be symetrical.

[KiteRider]

1/5
+1 = First Map :P
-Unused Space
-So many refills. Should be once in a long while that you see them.
-3x3, so much space. Start off with some smaller dimensions.
-Huge-Arse ladder...don't see one THAT big in a while
-Crouch jumps...Crouch = Ouch
-Top Middle spawns: Remove
-Cramped
-Few places to fight
^Ouch

Suggestions:
With Refills, eliminate every single one inside the Red and Blue 'Bases'. They're pointless. The only ones that should stay are in the middle right/left, which will bring the gameplay to the top more often.

Use dimensions smaller than 3x3. It's alright, i'm guessing pretty much everyone uses 3x3's the first time they're in Map Maker.

Keep working at it.

[Soul]

1/5
+1 = First Map :P
-Unused Space
-So many refills. Should be once in a long while that you see them.
-3x3, so much space. Start off with some smaller dimensions.
-Huge-Arse ladder...don't see one THAT big in a while
-Crouch jumps...Crouch = Ouch
-Top Middle spawns: Remove
-Cramped
-Few places to fight
^Ouch

Suggestions:
With Refills, eliminate every single one inside the Red and Blue 'Bases'. They're pointless. The only ones that should stay are in the middle right/left, which will bring the gameplay to the top more often.

Use dimensions smaller than 3x3. It's alright, i'm guessing pretty much everyone uses 3x3's the first time they're in Map Maker.

Keep working at it.
I found 2x1 and 1x2 and 3x1 to be the best starters.

[Puffer]

Looks kinda fun for a first map.

Make a better use of space next time.

[MasterMe]

not bad for a beginning mm. umm try to make it symetrical in a 2x2 instead of a 3x3. it will use up all that empty space that you have

[Dayo]

kk ill go and make it better thanx for the advise ill post it here shortly

[Dayo]

http://i209.photobucket.com/albums/bb180/05dayc/map2-2.png

[FireSpark]

3/5
I rate begiinners on the quality of there first map It is good for a first map but it has unused space and is boring bad game play

Just try harder
^ HIGHLIGHT ABOVE TO SEE ^

[KiteRider]

...
1/5
-Reminds me of arena, we don't need more gameplay like that...
-Upper Spawns are so rapeable...just stand and shoot at the head. and a refill...next to a spawn -_-
-Ladders touching. Double ladders even -_-

Next map you make, try using the Jungle tileset, and try to avoid using castle tiles.

[Killah]

not bad for a first map, use more space next time :) 3/5 for a first

[MasterMe]

...
1/5
-Reminds me of arena, we don't need more gameplay like that...
-Upper Spawns are so rapeable...just stand and shoot at the head. and a refill...next to a spawn -_-
-Ladders touching. Double ladders even -_-

Next map you make, try using the Jungle tileset, and try to avoid using castle tiles.
lol thats true... um just make the flat areas a bit more interesting...get rid or the spawn raping area and make the bottom a bit less flat