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Dylan
11-07-2008, 10:55 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/ab3t5t.png


Moar effects?

M1dnightCobra
11-07-2008, 11:15 PM
erase the stuff over the render...work on the colors..


the lighitng..


add some c4ds for some flow and lighting..

HWV
11-08-2008, 02:16 AM
This would benefit from some work on the lighting more than anything, but some more effects would do good. where is your light source right now? bottom center left? I think it would benefit from some text too. But overall, I think the blend is great, flow is pretty good, just not sure about how those bg colors are supposed to work with that particular render.