Plz help... one of my first maps o.o

[SoCalBlood]

http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm52/TjPwns/NewMap-1.jpg


http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm52/TjPwns/NewMapEdit-1.jpg


F boxes are boxed in blue, and refills are boxed in green.

i would appreciate any helpful comments, and could u plz give a rating thx.

i posted the edit, rate the one u like best plz.

[WolfHowlz]

You got the skeleton of the map..now make it interesting

[FireSpark]

You got the skeleton of the map..now make it interesting

yet again ill have to agree with wolfhowlz and whats the little green lines around the nub refillers for :)

[SoCalBlood]

F boxes are boxed in blue, and refills are boxed in green.



o.o

[Balmung]

Real nice map, just add background tiles, or say which background you used.

[quickkillerz]

You could make this map better in some places. Host it when you see me on an i will tell you.

[EduardoIceddude]

You could make this map better in some places. Host it when you see me on an i will tell you.

same here.

if you see edthejuggernaut online thats me.

it looks smexy for a first. try making it more of an "indoor" map, and focus on one theme.

btw the blue vs red ladders fail. they always do and always will.

[jjv22]

u made the basics of the map now put stuff to hide behind or camping spots.

[Puffer]

Your layout is poor, and you have quite a few useless areas.