Another failing map...

[CMD1]

Well here it is. go ahead im expecting alot of insults on this one. it is pretty simple. very simple to be exact. well here it is so rate it to a scale of 1 to 10. http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7889/92725045yc0.th.png (http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=92725045yc0.png)http://img517.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php) or you can post FAIL for bad or EPIC FAIL for wtf did you do to this map?!

[arabftw123]

Read the map making guide.

[Halogen]

It's okay, but why not make the spawns vehicles, like a helicopter. That would be so much better.

Rate : 7/10
Secondary Rate : Fail, but good fail. Not bad fail.

[Hurrikhayne11]

It's okay, but why not make the spawns vehicles, like a helicopter. That would be so much better.

Rate : 7/10
Secondary Rate : Fail, but good fail. Not bad fail.
7/10? LOL
dude, you can do better than this.
just fix up the middle with more tiles.
the game looks very boring.
lot of spawn camping too..
well...2/10.

[CMD1]

arab dont be a jerk. and it's not that bad. im only human you idiots.

[Hurrikhayne11]

arab dont be a jerk. and it's not that bad. im only human you idiots.
no one is being a jerk.
arab is just trying to help you.
just do as he says, and read some guides.
they will help out a lot.
they helped me, because i didn't know how to make god maps either at one point.

[Sinful]

arab dont be a jerk. and it's not that bad. im only human you idiots.

I was going to be nice, but mainly since you said that.

gtfo of submissions if you know its going to fail, make some maps get some friends to say whats wrong with it (real ones will say whats wrong)
then submit on normal map making.......

Its sensible, if you know it wont get submittted. then you shouldent put it here.

[arabftw123]

arab dont be a jerk. and it's not that bad. im only human you idiots.

1) I wasn't being a jerk, but I could be a total *** if you wanted me to be. I was giving you some advice that you desperately need if you're going to continue map making. Don't post your maps and expect to be met with flowers and cookies, man up, and take the advice.

2) No, it is that bad.

3) Obviously.

And stop posting maps in Submissions, this isn't where people critique beginner map makers.

EDIT: Evon, not the V2, the original. :O

[Evon]

Read the map making guide.
You mean the sticky with nothign but a table of contents?
arab dont be a jerk. and it's not that bad. im only human you idiots.
Lol.
I wont bother replying as it will end in an infraction and Arab already addressed it.



Don't have crouch jumps.

Don't make to many spawn boxes.
Try not to have so much open space.
Add decoration with Foreground tiles
Make sure you don't have bad camping spots.
Add a refill or two in spots that aren't close to spawn, but not to far away.
(Anti camping method.)

[CMD1]

sorry arab. i owe you an opolidgy. i will read the guides and if im that bad i wont make maps. simple as that.

[EduardoIceddude]

cmd1 don't be upset.

my first map got flamed so bad, I thought the whole forum was full of psychos.
turns out that practice makes better.

now arab actually looks at my maps and tells me if he <3s them or not xD

[Hamo]

It's okay, but why not make the spawns vehicles, like a helicopter. That would be so much better.

Rate : 7/10
Secondary Rate : Fail, but good fail. Not bad fail.

You have got to be kidding me.

Map making guide looks like its been wrecked O_o

here is a little one
http://www.pawngame.com/guides.php?p=4