death in the jungle- KiLLeR28051995

[KiLLeR28051995]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/408/20802569ow0.jpg
rate and suggestions plz

edit: this is out of date plz go to last page and see updated versions!!

[arabftw123]

(a) the picture is smaller than my pinky and (b) I can't even click on it to make it bigger..

www.tinypic.com

[Dpballer]

awful map
too many artis and should anyways...
bad layout
Overall rating: .5/5

[SPOT2008]

if ure a beginer map maker stay away from the junglt tiles they are to hard to work with

aweyway this is a very ehhhh map

2/5

[NuMbA]

no offense (even thought this will offend you) it looks ugly, all the aretifacts will make it lag and it seems more like a maze then a place to battle in

[Hurrikhayne11]

looks like a pretty good map.
but all those artifacts will make the game lag like crazy.
take those out and replace them with water tiles or something.

[Hamo]

All them arties makes heaps lag kinda bit messy...5/10

[Balmung]

Not worth rating.

The map would lag like no other, due to the excessive use of the artifact. The spawns are flying. Useless ladders. Etc...

[KiLLeR28051995]

ok i will take out arti's and post again.

edit: here we go
http://i36.tinypic.com/2luzbc9.jpg
i have added an underwater section: fighting in the river??

[KiteRider]

...

Tile Flow

1:Take out:
-Artis (Duh :/)
-Space Tiles
-Canopy, probably look better without siding
-The top...looks dull...make the top more creative than just red...stuff...
-Junkyard Tiles
-Whatever it is at the top

2:Put In:
-More of the grass

Refill Placement
-Allows, and encourges spawn camping

Crouching
-Slows down gameplay
-A crouch jump...evil...

Gameplay
-Open it up more in the middle
-The River is a campfest...maybe change the volcano ropeway to ones that you can fall through.


Final Critique
-Tile Flow -2
-Bad RP -1
-Crouch=Ouch -1
-Gameplay -0.75
Score : 0.25/5
If first map, add 1 to your score...
...i have too much spare time :P

[KiLLeR28051995]

cahze thx
will edit again...

[Hyjal]

- Lack of Themes
- Lower the Limits and move them
- Camping
- Make complete Ladders

0.5/10

[lili]

(a) the picture is smaller than my pinky and (b) I can't even click on it to make it bigger..

www.tinypic.com

you must have a bug pinky :eek: for the map, could be better, alot better 1/5

[KiLLeR28051995]

hows this?
http://i38.tinypic.com/2v9b5gy.jpg

[KiLLeR28051995]

bump!!!!!!

[KiLLeR28051995]

is the above map better??