Tomers first map

[tomer123]

heres my first map guys
alot of people love it
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/568/mymapsn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/mymapsn5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img134/mymapsn5.jpg/1/)

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4815/mymap2jx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/mymap2jx2.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img232/mymap2jx2.jpg/1/)

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/2839/mymap3fu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/mymap3fu5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img232/mymap3fu5.jpg/1/)

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/7971/mymap4lo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/mymap4lo8.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img54/mymap4lo8.jpg/1/)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4797/mymap5mg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/mymap5mg2.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/mymap5mg2.jpg/1/)

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/128/mymap6vg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/mymap6vg1.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img150/mymap6vg1.jpg/1/)

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6066/mymap7bj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/mymap7bj7.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img54/mymap7bj7.jpg/1/)

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4350/mymap8id3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/mymap8id3.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img178/mymap8id3.jpg/1/)

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/640/mymap9wg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/mymap9wg3.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img135/mymap9wg3.jpg/1/)

tell me what you think

[drunkdestroyer]

Do I really need to rate this?

[tomer123]

i clicked here hoping for a reply and a rating and i got a spam post

[drunkdestroyer]

Do I really need to rate this?

i clicked here hoping for a reply and a rating and i got a spam post


Thats not a spam reply, that was a real question. Before you submit a map, you should always test it throughly, and compare it to the Map Making Guide. I think you should edit it, and make it better before you submit it here. But if not, here are the things I have found.

Spawns too close to Each other
Extremely Flat
Lots of wasted space
Boxes used as main theme of map
ladder Camping
Screen jumping in Camping spots in the middle
Bad Layout
Terrble gameplay


Happy Now? 1/5

[tomer123]

thanks now i know what i made what crap
ill try to improve it

[SourPatchKid]

there is like one block in every room. Also why in the world would you post your first map?

[EduardoIceddude]

erm...

im sorry, but you have soo many things wrong with that.

just look at the motw entries and learn from there.

[tomer123]

ok enoupgh woth the freakin pms and posts

i screwed up
im sorry , i just wanted to show pawn community not get bombarded in my pms and posts

[Puffer]

Simple map. But I'm not really going to rate it since it's a first map.

Read the Map Making Guide for some more tips.

[quickkillerz]

Not good, but its your first so it wont be. Just keep practicing.

[Hamo]

Lol thats enough screenies.

For firt its alright just try fill in some more space and stuff.

[M]

Noob Map!!!!!!

[shooter65]

Noob Map!!!!!!

Don't put him down just because it's his first map. :|

[sparkz]

nasty. It Look More Like A Nut-house