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tomer123
09-16-2008, 01:25 PM
heres my first map guys
alot of people love it
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/568/mymapsn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/mymapsn5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img134/mymapsn5.jpg/1/)

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/4815/mymap2jx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/mymap2jx2.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img232/mymap2jx2.jpg/1/)

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/2839/mymap3fu5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/mymap3fu5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img232/mymap3fu5.jpg/1/)

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/7971/mymap4lo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/mymap4lo8.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img54/mymap4lo8.jpg/1/)

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4797/mymap5mg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/mymap5mg2.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img142/mymap5mg2.jpg/1/)

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/128/mymap6vg1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/mymap6vg1.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img150/mymap6vg1.jpg/1/)

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6066/mymap7bj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/mymap7bj7.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img54/mymap7bj7.jpg/1/)

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4350/mymap8id3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/mymap8id3.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img178/mymap8id3.jpg/1/)

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/640/mymap9wg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/mymap9wg3.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img135/mymap9wg3.jpg/1/)

tell me what you think

drunkdestroyer
09-16-2008, 03:54 PM
Do I really need to rate this?

tomer123
09-16-2008, 04:10 PM
i clicked here hoping for a reply and a rating and i got a spam post

drunkdestroyer
09-16-2008, 04:21 PM
Do I really need to rate this?

i clicked here hoping for a reply and a rating and i got a spam post


Thats not a spam reply, that was a real question. Before you submit a map, you should always test it throughly, and compare it to the Map Making Guide. I think you should edit it, and make it better before you submit it here. But if not, here are the things I have found.

Spawns too close to Each other
Extremely Flat
Lots of wasted space
Boxes used as main theme of map
ladder Camping
Screen jumping in Camping spots in the middle
Bad Layout
Terrble gameplay


Happy Now? 1/5

tomer123
09-16-2008, 05:28 PM
thanks now i know what i made what crap
ill try to improve it

SourPatchKid
09-16-2008, 09:43 PM
there is like one block in every room. Also why in the world would you post your first map?

EduardoIceddude
09-16-2008, 09:48 PM
erm...

im sorry, but you have soo many things wrong with that.

just look at the motw entries and learn from there.

tomer123
09-17-2008, 01:39 AM
ok enoupgh woth the freakin pms and posts

i screwed up
im sorry , i just wanted to show pawn community not get bombarded in my pms and posts

Puffer
09-17-2008, 01:55 AM
Simple map. But I'm not really going to rate it since it's a first map.

Read the Map Making Guide for some more tips.

quickkillerz
09-17-2008, 09:01 PM
Not good, but its your first so it wont be. Just keep practicing.

Hamo
09-17-2008, 11:11 PM
Lol thats enough screenies.

For firt its alright just try fill in some more space and stuff.

M
09-18-2008, 06:13 AM
Noob Map!!!!!!

shooter65
09-18-2008, 06:16 AM
Noob Map!!!!!!

Don't put him down just because it's his first map. :|

sparkz
09-18-2008, 03:04 PM
nasty. It Look More Like A Nut-house