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wut
08-27-2008, 09:16 PM
V1)
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/Joey1187/risingsunfinished.png

V2)
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/Joey1187/risingsunfinishedv2.png

V3)
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/Joey1187/risingsunfinishedv3.png



I really like the outcome.
luka102
08-27-2008, 09:49 PM
a wireframe behind him (a dense one) would make it great.
and also the spatters kill it.
otherwise very good job!
wut
08-27-2008, 09:51 PM
a wireframe behind him (a dense one) would make it great.
and also the spatters kill it.
otherwise very good job!

Thats not the reaction I got on PR.

But thanks.

I will make a second version.
Skuhl
08-27-2008, 09:54 PM
sorry but all ic an say is... eh. i think you couldve done better. try making a lp but with great detail. i think you could do it. even its a manip
wut
08-27-2008, 10:14 PM
sorry but all ic an say is... eh. i think you couldve done better. try making a lp but with great detail. i think you could do it. even its a manip

LPs are not my thing.

I tried an LP once.

I completley failed.
wut
08-27-2008, 10:28 PM
Here is a second version.

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/Joey1187/risingsunfinishedv2.png

I like this outcome even more.
luka102
08-27-2008, 10:42 PM
i was thinking of maybe a REALLY dense wireframe
http://i227.photobucket.com/albums/dd150/luka102/wf20.png
Bonk
08-27-2008, 10:45 PM
You guys are all so good. I need to get better. D:
wut
08-28-2008, 05:16 PM
Here.

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/Joey1187/risingsunfinishedv3.png

Dense enouph?
Skuhl
08-28-2008, 05:19 PM
better
...
bigbase
08-28-2008, 05:22 PM
i think itsgood ecsept the black BG could use something in it. but other then that. 8/10
wut
08-28-2008, 06:38 PM
i think itsgood ecsept the black BG could use something in it. but other then that. 8/10

Thanks.

Anybody else?
M1dnightCobra
08-28-2008, 06:47 PM
bottom one is wayyy better...lol nice job...keep getting better =P
wut
08-28-2008, 06:49 PM
bottom one is wayyy better...lol nice job...keep getting better =P

Thank you.

And I intend to get better.

I need to to get my dream job.

A free-lance graphical desinger.
M1dnightCobra
08-28-2008, 06:53 PM
lol tht was a fast response..


wats a free-lance if u dont mind me asking?
wut
08-28-2008, 06:55 PM
lol tht was a fast response..


wats a free-lance if u dont mind me asking?

It means I do graphical designing for people.

But Im not under contract.

Which means I can decline jobs and accept them as I please.
M1dnightCobra
08-28-2008, 07:07 PM
do you get paid???
bigbase
08-28-2008, 07:15 PM
paid for free lancing??? ooh clue me in!!!
BloodRedSun
08-28-2008, 07:20 PM
NICE! Love the negative space.

Though actually, I think if you put a bit more into it this would be better as an abstract.
JediLucas5
08-28-2008, 08:21 PM
Third one is pretty awesome.
wut
08-28-2008, 08:57 PM
do you get paid???

of course.

NICE! Love the negative space.

Though actually, I think if you put a bit more into it this would be better as an abstract.

Thank you.

Third one is pretty awesome.

Thanks.

Think its my best?
yingyomofo
08-28-2008, 10:12 PM
instead of using green splatters
use red and white ones
make them organized and unique though