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Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 11:56 AM
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3033/twilight1jm2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3033/twilight1jm2.5d04ba10bf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=365&i=twilight1jm2.png)

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/16/twilight2ee1.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3739/twilight3ii8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3739/twilight3ii8.457d9e56a0.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=211&i=twilight3ii8.png)


so DO WHAT THE 3RD SCREEN SAYS TO DO!!!

Chickletman
08-05-2008, 01:08 PM
Add another way for red/blue to leave the base or move one of the spawns
move the refills

Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 01:19 PM
How about this?

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8404/twilight4ol0.png (http://imageshack.us)

Chickletman
08-05-2008, 01:21 PM
I guess you could do that...

Now just remove the ladder crouch jump on the sides

It is your best btw, but still needs work

From the last maps I've seen from you, you've gotten better

Puffer
08-05-2008, 03:33 PM
2/5.

Nothing that creative or special here. You need more space used in a 3x1, a bit more.

Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 03:41 PM
puffer you wanted more space used then, will this work... or did i just *beeped* all up?

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2276/twilight5pa3.png (http://imageshack.us)

Tman340
08-05-2008, 04:32 PM
It not bad , i like the guided tour with narration. Nice map 3/5.

EduardoIceddude
08-05-2008, 04:58 PM
4/5

if you added hiding places inside the bridge thing, it would be cooler (I think)

sparkz
08-05-2008, 05:23 PM
one O The Better Map I Have Seen.
7/10

Bonk
08-05-2008, 05:26 PM
Umm those are okay... you could do better. I dont really like the refill placement.

Chickletman
08-05-2008, 05:28 PM
one O The Better Map I Have Seen.
7/10

LOL

you have to be joking :D

You rate masters maps 1/10 for "Lack of creativity"....

Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 05:56 PM
Umm those are okay... you could do better. I dont really like the refill placement.

you know i was thinking the exact same thing but idont know where to put them... any ideas?

Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 05:58 PM
4/5

if you added hiding places inside the bridge thing, it would be cooler (I think)


i know, thats the part that messes me up
but how can i improve that damned bridge :O

Killerrrrrr
08-05-2008, 06:27 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/734/twilight6bb3.png (http://imageshack.us)

like the room at the top niddle? :D anyway i couldnt find better places for the ammo tiles, im still w8ing for some suggestions...

Killerrrrrr
08-06-2008, 04:38 PM
Do you guys like the plac i placed the refils? i dont think it will be much abused there...:D

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5400/twilight7ql3.png (http://imageshack.us)

acano
08-06-2008, 04:44 PM
unfourtnatly i do not like it

Killerrrrrr
08-07-2008, 01:10 PM
Heres the code so you guys can try it : Team Deathmatch&Twilight Zone&4&44&12&19,19,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,23,17,22,22,1 7,17,22,22,17,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,19 ,19,19,19,19,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,23,17,2 2,17,17,17,17,22,17,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0, 23,19,19,19,8,7,19,23,19,0,0,0,0,16,19,0,0,0,0,0,2 0,23,20,20,20,20,20,20,20,20,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,19,16 ,0,0,0,0,19,23,19,7,8,1,8,9,23,19,19,19,19,16,19,1 9,19,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,19, 19,19,16,19,19,19,19,23,9,8,2,15,15,8,23,19,17,0,1 9,19,19,0,0,0,0,20,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,2 0,0,0,0,0,19,19,19,0,17,19,23,8,15,15,9,8,7,23,17, 17,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,20,20,20,23,0,0,23,0,0,23,0,0, 23,20,20,20,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,17,17,23,7,8,9,8,8,8, 23,17,17,17,0,0,0,0,0,20,22,23,20,20,20,0,0,23,20, 20,23,0,0,20,20,20,23,22,20,0,0,0,0,0,17,17,17,23, 8,8,8,7,8,9,23,19,19,19,0,0,0,20,20,20,3,23,20,20, 20,20,20,23,20,20,23,20,20,20,20,20,23,3,20,20,20, 0,0,0,19,19,19,23,9,8,7,8,7,8,23,19,0,0,23,0,20,20 ,20,20,20,23,0,0,0,20,20,23,0,0,23,20,20,0,0,0,23, 20,20,20,20,20,0,23,0,0,19,23,8,7,8,15,15,1,23,19, 0,0,23,20,20,20,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,23,0,0,0 ,0,0,23,0,0,0,20,20,20,23,0,0,19,23,2,15,15,15,15, 15,23,19,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,20,0,0,0,23,0,0,2 3,0,0,0,20,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,19,23,15,15,15, 15,15,15,15,19,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,20,0,23,20,20,20,0,0 ,23,20,20,23,0,0,20,20,20,23,0,20,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,1 9,15,15,15,15

DuckFan4Life
08-08-2008, 04:50 AM
I like the updated versions a lot better, add some refills at the top maybe. It looks pretty fun, great job man. 8.5/10

LoveStruck
08-08-2008, 06:27 AM
2/5.

Nothing that creative or special here. You need more space used in a 3x1, a bit more.

LOL WOW?
You don't even rate Arab that high?
Why so high? I think you were in a good mood.
xD

Good map nothing cool.
1/5 =D

Robeto
08-08-2008, 06:30 AM
It's a little plain, and the middle is probably just gonna be a big camp out, a bit like jungle assault, try making it a little more creativ in the middle, like hidey holes for example, 7/10

Badkiller00
08-08-2008, 09:35 AM
Not bad 3/5.

Itches
08-09-2008, 06:56 AM
well u would need to do a ladderless to get back in to the bace 1/5.

Killerrrrrr
08-09-2008, 12:07 PM
OK here's the newly updated version!! Now silversurfer you said that we can go back in the base? how? if you can well thats what i dont want because of spawn camping. Secondly, i un-plained it a bit, not alot but a bit is better than not at all.

IMPORTANT!!!! Do I need to paste back the code now that i updated my map?

Anyway here is the updated version

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1458/twilight8oz9.png (http://imageshack.us)

TicTacToe
08-09-2008, 03:38 PM
4/5 I like it, good use of space and no too much camping.

MEHELLO
08-10-2008, 07:26 PM
its ok 3/5

iPood
08-11-2008, 02:21 PM
It's a really good map. It's right up there with Castle wars. I hope to see it severed someday :D

Longgone
08-11-2008, 03:56 PM
Its alright but what if the one team just stays in their base from the other team?

Killerrrrrr
08-18-2008, 10:14 AM
huh... they just hum, stay there until the others are gone... i dunno... i will maybe change that
yeah

th3mast3r
08-19-2008, 03:32 AM
Hm is not bad at all.

But one huge problem, The camping outside the bases <.<

Killerrrrrr
08-26-2008, 09:58 AM
well i thats why Chickletman made me add another way out :/

Killerrrrrr
08-26-2008, 10:00 AM
hmmm i have this question : does Blank come see the maps in here, or only at the submission section? should i submit it?