Twilight Zone - best map i made

[Killerrrrrr]

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3033/twilight1jm2.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3033/twilight1jm2.5d04ba10bf.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=365&i=twilight1jm2.png)

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/16/twilight2ee1.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3739/twilight3ii8.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/3739/twilight3ii8.457d9e56a0.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=211&i=twilight3ii8.png)


so DO WHAT THE 3RD SCREEN SAYS TO DO!!!

[Chickletman]

Add another way for red/blue to leave the base or move one of the spawns
move the refills

[Killerrrrrr]

How about this?

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8404/twilight4ol0.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Chickletman]

I guess you could do that...

Now just remove the ladder crouch jump on the sides

It is your best btw, but still needs work

From the last maps I've seen from you, you've gotten better

[Puffer]

2/5.

Nothing that creative or special here. You need more space used in a 3x1, a bit more.

[Killerrrrrr]

puffer you wanted more space used then, will this work... or did i just *beeped* all up?

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2276/twilight5pa3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Tman340]

It not bad , i like the guided tour with narration. Nice map 3/5.

[EduardoIceddude]

4/5

if you added hiding places inside the bridge thing, it would be cooler (I think)

[sparkz]

one O The Better Map I Have Seen.
7/10

[Bonk]

Umm those are okay... you could do better. I dont really like the refill placement.

[Chickletman]

one O The Better Map I Have Seen.
7/10

LOL

you have to be joking :D

You rate masters maps 1/10 for "Lack of creativity"....

[Killerrrrrr]

Umm those are okay... you could do better. I dont really like the refill placement.

you know i was thinking the exact same thing but idont know where to put them... any ideas?

[Killerrrrrr]

4/5

if you added hiding places inside the bridge thing, it would be cooler (I think)


i know, thats the part that messes me up
but how can i improve that damned bridge :O

[Killerrrrrr]

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/734/twilight6bb3.png (http://imageshack.us)

like the room at the top niddle? :D anyway i couldnt find better places for the ammo tiles, im still w8ing for some suggestions...

[Killerrrrrr]

Do you guys like the plac i placed the refils? i dont think it will be much abused there...:D

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5400/twilight7ql3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[acano]

unfourtnatly i do not like it

[Killerrrrrr]

Heres the code so you guys can try it : Team Deathmatch&Twilight Zone&4&44&12&19,19,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,23,17,22,22,1 7,17,22,22,17,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,19 ,19,19,19,19,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,23,17,2 2,17,17,17,17,22,17,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0, 23,19,19,19,8,7,19,23,19,0,0,0,0,16,19,0,0,0,0,0,2 0,23,20,20,20,20,20,20,20,20,23,20,0,0,0,0,0,19,16 ,0,0,0,0,19,23,19,7,8,1,8,9,23,19,19,19,19,16,19,1 9,19,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,19, 19,19,16,19,19,19,19,23,9,8,2,15,15,8,23,19,17,0,1 9,19,19,0,0,0,0,20,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,2 0,0,0,0,0,19,19,19,0,17,19,23,8,15,15,9,8,7,23,17, 17,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,20,20,20,20,23,0,0,23,0,0,23,0,0, 23,20,20,20,20,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,17,17,23,7,8,9,8,8,8, 23,17,17,17,0,0,0,0,0,20,22,23,20,20,20,0,0,23,20, 20,23,0,0,20,20,20,23,22,20,0,0,0,0,0,17,17,17,23, 8,8,8,7,8,9,23,19,19,19,0,0,0,20,20,20,3,23,20,20, 20,20,20,23,20,20,23,20,20,20,20,20,23,3,20,20,20, 0,0,0,19,19,19,23,9,8,7,8,7,8,23,19,0,0,23,0,20,20 ,20,20,20,23,0,0,0,20,20,23,0,0,23,20,20,0,0,0,23, 20,20,20,20,20,0,23,0,0,19,23,8,7,8,15,15,1,23,19, 0,0,23,20,20,20,0,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,23,0,0,0 ,0,0,23,0,0,0,20,20,20,23,0,0,19,23,2,15,15,15,15, 15,23,19,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,20,0,0,0,23,0,0,2 3,0,0,0,20,0,23,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,19,23,15,15,15, 15,15,15,15,19,0,0,23,0,0,0,0,20,0,23,20,20,20,0,0 ,23,20,20,23,0,0,20,20,20,23,0,20,0,0,0,0,23,0,0,1 9,15,15,15,15

[DuckFan4Life]

I like the updated versions a lot better, add some refills at the top maybe. It looks pretty fun, great job man. 8.5/10

[LoveStruck]

2/5.

Nothing that creative or special here. You need more space used in a 3x1, a bit more.

LOL WOW?
You don't even rate Arab that high?
Why so high? I think you were in a good mood.
xD

Good map nothing cool.
1/5 =D

[Robeto]

It's a little plain, and the middle is probably just gonna be a big camp out, a bit like jungle assault, try making it a little more creativ in the middle, like hidey holes for example, 7/10

[Badkiller00]

Not bad 3/5.

[Itches]

well u would need to do a ladderless to get back in to the bace 1/5.

[Killerrrrrr]

OK here's the newly updated version!! Now silversurfer you said that we can go back in the base? how? if you can well thats what i dont want because of spawn camping. Secondly, i un-plained it a bit, not alot but a bit is better than not at all.

IMPORTANT!!!! Do I need to paste back the code now that i updated my map?

Anyway here is the updated version

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1458/twilight8oz9.png (http://imageshack.us)

[TicTacToe]

4/5 I like it, good use of space and no too much camping.

[MEHELLO]

its ok 3/5

[iPood]

It's a really good map. It's right up there with Castle wars. I hope to see it severed someday :D

[Longgone]

Its alright but what if the one team just stays in their base from the other team?

[Killerrrrrr]

huh... they just hum, stay there until the others are gone... i dunno... i will maybe change that
yeah

[th3mast3r]

Hm is not bad at all.

But one huge problem, The camping outside the bases <.<

[Killerrrrrr]

well i thats why Chickletman made me add another way out :/

[Killerrrrrr]

hmmm i have this question : does Blank come see the maps in here, or only at the submission section? should i submit it?