Ewwww.

[Trademark]

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/T24D3M42K/PoolSide-3.png
Getting better-ish?

[luka102]

colors are washed out on the guy.

[37]

loose blue lines
add more effects

[Tman340]

ewww is right, It still needs more work, what are blue lines supposed to be, hands, flowers what are they?

[Eiliosdraye]

Boring, blue lines don`t add to the sig at all.
2/5
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7443/mudkipzwr2.jpg

[Trademark]

Can you guys see the wire-frame?

[henry535]

yeah, get rid of the blue... bushes? or clouds?

[Trademark]

yeah, get rid of the blue... bushes? or clouds?

It's called pen-tooling. :D

[JediLucas5]

Make the lines go behind the render and make the render a darker blue.

[poxboy]

loose blue lines
add more effects

do that ^^^^

[Trademark]

Thanks for the advice. I'll try some stuff out now. :D