My very first PhotoShop Sig, WIP stage one.

[SexySniper]

All I have been doing is reading tuts, and trying to find a way to make it not suck, I sorta like how it is, seems a bit to bright, I called it something about smoking, but forgot exactly while reading a photofilter tut :D



BE VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY HARSH.


http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/hj5f94k75/WIP.png
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/hj5f94k75/WIP-1.png
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/hj5f94k75/WIP-2.png


EDIT: I don't know why, everything comes out blurry after I upload...it looks stranger to me...

[Beef]

wow. great for a first. probably better than i could do, and i have been doing GFX for like 2 months D:

[SexySniper]

I edited a bit, just seemed strange to me.
http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/hj5f94k75/WIP-1.png
or

http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg25/hj5f94k75/WIP-2.png

[yingyomofo]

ok you want harsh this is the best i can tell you
the render doesnt blend with teh BG, smudge it and erase sides to make it bland

the c4d stand out too much
blur it to add depth

no light source
take a 100px white soft brush and brush on a side and set to soft light,overlay or w/e

take out those random flare cricles

pretty good for a first though :)

too much contrast on V2
adding a B&W grad map as a second option is good as well
sharpen the Render to add mroe depth

[SexySniper]

I slightly changed the 3rd one, didn't read your post about smudging and erasing before that one.
I'm trying to find a tut I read that was completely about render blending and it was really good and long and detailed, and I forgot where it was >.<

[luka102]

to blend your render you can just add effects covering the sides..

[SexySniper]

to blend your render you can just add effects covering the sides..

doesn't look as good as his tuts turnout was.

[robodestructo]

If you want me to be harsh, here u go...

IT SUCKS

I HATE THE COLORS THE CIGAR IS DUMB, AND IT LOOKS LIKE YOU BURNT IT

jkjk

[deathrogue]

Tight, i like how you used a Gorillaz render lol.

[SexySniper]

If you want me to be harsh, here u go...

IT SUCKS

I HATE THE COLORS THE CIGAR IS DUMB, AND IT LOOKS LIKE YOU BURNT IT

jkjk
so no real critique?
Tight, i like how you used a Gorillaz render lol.
I didn't know what it was besides a dude with a ciggy, I saw it in a tut and it was under music renders at PR for some reason.
I was looking for a nice guitar render and saw that was like "what luck!"

[JediLucas5]

Render sucks, because it is Gorrilaz, and they're not real musicians.

Add more C4Ds for flow, and keep looking at tuts.

[two11]

you ******* own.
hahahaha Nice first sig.
Dont hang around here 2 get better tho.

[blondie]

Wow, first is kinda sorta okay. =)



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Dont hang around here 2 get better tho.

[SexySniper]

Render sucks, because it is Gorrilaz, and they're not real musicians.

Add more C4Ds for flow, and keep looking at tuts.
I thought it was just some cartoon placed in wrong section at PR lmao.
K, searching for some more flow and lighting tuts.
you ******* own.
hahahaha Nice first sig.
Dont hang around here 2 get better tho.
Thanks, is gFXVoid a good site? I read like 30 tuts off there. It seems to be great but I don't know much about GFX sites.
Wow, first is kinda sorta okay. =)



and
Thanks, and I'll make sure to be active on dedicated GFX sites :D