My llittle Haiku.

[Morgo]

This is a haiku I made recently. Hope y'all like it.

Covered with the flowers,
Instantly I'd like to die
In this dream of ours!

[OGCrookedO]

5 7 5 proper
6 7 5 yours

bad haiku structure wise D:

[Morgo]

I dun need to check my haiku b4 posting. o_0