First map by Stinger------Volcanic Paradise

[Stinger007]

Here's my first map.
I hope you guys like it.
Plz rate it and give me some tips to become better in making maps.


http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/8050/imagehackjn8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[robodestructo]

Maybe u could add another respawn or something?

[caterknight]

you need more open space for fighting other wise its like nightinggale

[quickkillerz]

Why would you call this Volcanic Paradise, your just taking arab and tj's name. And secondly, who the hell would want to go to a Volcano for Paradise. Not too sure you thought the name out to good. 1/5, cause of the name.

[arabftw123]

This is a pretty decent map for your first. Trust me, I've seen A LOT worse. :)

Some things to remember:

- Your gameplay would mainly be on the ladders.
- Drop down spawns aren't good, they lead to spawn camping most of the time.
- Having only one set of spawns also leads to spawn camping because they will always spawn there.
- Some parts of your map are really open and flat.

I suggest reading the Map Making Guide if you haven't already. The more maps you make the better you'll get so keep going and judging by the quality of your first, you could become pretty damn good. :D

[Beef]

This is a pretty decent map for your first. Trust me, I've seen A LOT worse. :)



yeah like my first :eek:

[Puffer]

Pretty nice for a first.

But like QuickKillerz said, who in the right mind would call a damn volcano a paradise?

[TacticalKiller1]

Nice Map for ur first map but... Its Way to Flat.Dude can u put some obstacles or something...To make it more challenging.

[Stinger007]

Pretty nice for a first.

But like QuickKillerz said, who in the right mind would call a damn volcano a paradise?

yeah maybe ur right, maybe I have to chose another name.
But the problem is that I don't have any ideas.
So,... Can someone give me some ideas for choosing a new name.

:)

[Hyjal]

Not really a good map
1 Spawn Camping - Add another
Plain - Just walking up ladders, and Walking on Platforms
Screening, i think on Middle and Sides of middle
Im gonna give it 2/10
Also, it doesnt seem like Paradise

-Hyjal
:cool:

[Stonch]

Not bad just need more work =]

7/10

[arabftw123]

yeah maybe ur right, maybe I have to chose another name.
But the problem is that I don't have any ideas.
So,... Can someone give me some ideas for choosing a new name.

:)

How about:



Volcanic Playground
Volcanic Brawl

Just an idea.

[Stinger007]

Oooooooooooooooooooo, you're a guy (or girl) with many ideas.
I like the name:Volcanic Brawl. :D

THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!!

[superpotatopwns]

good map for ur first
-add 1 more spawn point for ea team
-bottom n top r very open
-lots of spawn camping
-3/5 pretty good map for ur first

[jakef]

spawn camping is a negative, noobs would own at that, 6/10, but its your first map as u said so u will improve lots

[modam]

seen as its first i give it 4/10

needs more work others said it

i think u should try start all over dtich that map and try with easier tiles like urban and industy

(its HAMO)

[Puffer]

Roffle.

No one noticed how flat the map is in all areas. ^_^

You guys gotta have a more keen eye.