My 2nd Map

[PawnMember]

I like this one. Gameplay is fun.
http://i28.tinypic.com/1zpo93c.png%5B/IMG%5D
Rate (don't be mean like last time if you do not like it).

[grs345]

that is sick! make a game and hit me up and ill join. i'd realy like to check it out!

edit: oops i forgot to rate it... 7/10

[Near]

Have You Read The Map Guides Yet.

NO Double Ladders.

Where Are The Refills.

Cant Really Hide.

Spawns Generaly Shouldent Be Besides On Another Ond Their Are Way To many Of Them.

Most 3x3 Maps Are Hard To Make Good But Still.

0.5/5

[shooter65]

Don't make double ladders.

Don't make 3 x 3 maps at your current level.

Dont make spawn next to each other.

Don't make that many spawns.

Make a map that is a lot less sucky

0.1/5.

Gee thanks for the burning image of this map, now I'm gonna go to my local gun store buy a shotgun and shoot my self in the head just to get this image out.

(I"m kidding about the gun part.)

[Fweem]

Now, if you were to reposition the spawns and made all nine screens look the same, it would be a different story.

Now, it just plain sucks.

[quickkillerz]

WAY to many ladders, spawn dont go together. Try again.

[Chickletman]

Too repetitive as well

[SeniorApples]

This sucks...hurts my eyes.
I cant rate this....whatever it is...:mad:

[PawnMember]

that is sick! make a game and hit me up and ill join. i'd realy like to check it out!

edit: oops i forgot to rate it... 7/10
hey someones not an a-hole. I love you.

Have You Read The Map Guides Yet.

NO Double Ladders.

Where Are The Refills.

Cant Really Hide.

Spawns Generaly Shouldent Be Besides On Another Ond Their Are Way To many Of Them.

Most 3x3 Maps Are Hard To Make Good But Still.

0.5/5
if it wasnt a double it wouldn't be in he middle and it would look retarded. whats so bad about them huh?

Don't make double ladders.

Don't make 3 x 3 maps at your current level.

Dont make spawn next to each other.

Don't make that many spawns.

Make a map that is a lot less sucky

0.1/5.

Gee thanks for the burning image of this map, now I'm gonna go to my local gun store buy a shotgun and shoot my self in the head just to get this image out.

(I"m kidding)
good kill yourself cus I don't need to hear people being such a-holes about a map in a free game.
why dont you go shove that shotgun up your @ss.

Now, if you were to reposition the spawns and made all nine screens look the same, it would be a different story.

Now, it just plain sucks.
maybe you can give nice tips instead of sounding like someone with a stick rammed through his but 80 times.

WAY to many ladders, spawn dont go together. Try again.
that wasn't mean. thank you.

Too repetitive as well
thanks for not being mean about it.

This sucks...hurts my eyes.
I cant rate this....whatever it is...:mad:
why don't you shove those apples down your throat so I don't have to hear you sounding like an a-hole who's had it in his @ss too many times.

Is it really necessary to be that mean when I only posted it so I would know what to change.
You don't have to be such a ***** about it.
All you a-holes can just suck on my poll.

[Cruzr]

hey someones not an a-hole. I love you.


if it wasnt a double it wouldn't be in he middle and it would look retarded. whats so bad about them huh?


good kill yourself cus I don't need to hear people being such a-holes about a map in a free game.
why dont you go shove that shotgun up your @ss.


maybe you can give nice tips instead of sounding like someone with a stick rammed through his but 80 times.


that wasn't mean. thank you.


thanks for not being mean about it.


why don't you shove those apples down your throat so I don't have to hear you sounding like an a-hole who's had it in his @ss too many times.

Is it really necessary to be that mean when I only posted it so I would know what to change.
You don't have to be such a ***** about it.
All you a-holes can just suck on my poll.

All of you just got your ***** kicked with words...
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b157/duznuts/owned2.jpg

[Fweem]

Look, I'm not being mean, you just took it in like someone with a stick rammed through his butt 80 times.

Stop complaining, my comment was definitely more useful than the ones that weren't "mean".

[shooter65]

hey someones not an a-hole. I love you.


if it wasnt a double it wouldn't be in he middle and it would look retarded. whats so bad about them huh?


good kill yourself cus I don't need to hear people being such a-holes about a map in a free game.
why dont you go shove that shotgun up your @ss.


maybe you can give nice tips instead of sounding like someone with a stick rammed through his but 80 times.


that wasn't mean. thank you.


thanks for not being mean about it.


why don't you shove those apples down your throat so I don't have to hear you sounding like an a-hole who's had it in his @ss too many times.

Is it really necessary to be that mean when I only posted it so I would know what to change.
You don't have to be such a ***** about it.
All you a-holes can just suck on my poll.

Dude I was rating your map not being an a-hole to it. <.< Besides I was kidding about the shotgun part. And have a nice ban.

[PawnMember]

I was trying to be nice but even after I said please don't be mean on top and all of you were being a-holes I just got mad.
You dbags can go suck it.

[shooter65]

I was trying to be nice but even after I said please don't be mean on top and all of you were being a-holes I just got mad.
You dbags can go suck it.

Well I it's too late. I sent foot the message and he will deal with this.

[PawnMember]

Wow way to be a little tattle telling **** sucker.
"Oh no I was mean to him and he faught.
FOOT HE WAS MEAN TO ME!!!!"

[shooter65]

Wow way to be a little tattle telling **** sucker.
"Oh no I was mean to him and he faught.
FOOT HE WAS MEAN TO ME!!!!"

o_O

Can't wait until that ban. Now I don't have to listen to you child.

[Cruzr]

o_O

Can't wait until that ban. Now I don't have to listen to you child.

You're not very good at comeback dude...

[shooter65]

You're not very good at comeback dude...

Yeah dude, maybe I'm not the kind OF person that can argu... Also dude eff off.

[PawnMember]

Maybe I'm not a kid.
I kinda just got ticked off and I actually have comebacks and have the guts to say something.
Seems like your the child.

[Near]

Get That Carrot Out Your Azz And Start Making Good
Maps Nub.

Dont Talk Like Your King Shiz Cause You Dont No Anything.

Your Map Sucks END OF STORY.

[Cruzr]

Get That Carrot Out Your Azz And Start Making Good
Maps Nub.

Dont Talk Like Your King Shiz Cause You Dont No Anything.

Your Map Sucks END OF STORY.

Did you seriously just tell him to take a carrot out of his azz?
Wow....That's all I can say....

[PawnMember]

Maybe you could not be an a-hole and post it like this.
"I can see your idea but here some things you need to fix. . ."
Instead of just being a dbag and going "this sucks! make it better you dumb noob!"
A carrot? Seriously? Where did you get that idea? Is it because theres one up your @ss right now.

[Chickletman]

You should I have just took the comments like a man... >:O

Every map gets bashed once in a while, just deal with the hecklers and try to shut them up by making an ownage map

[Near]

Maybe you could not be an a-hole and post it like this.
"I can see your idea but here some things you need to fix. . ."
Instead of just being a dbag and going "this sucks! make it better you dumb noob!"
A carrot? Seriously? Where did you get that idea? Is it because theres one up your @ss right now.

Listen Bud All I Posted Was What Was Worng With Your Map.

Then You Go All Crazy Calling Me Mean And I Didnt Do Shiz.

Take It Easy Spaz I Told You What Was Worng Fix It And Your Good
-.-

Was That So Hard

[shooter65]

Maybe I'm not a kid.
I kinda just got ticked off and I actually have comebacks and have the guts to say something.
Seems like your the child.

Again I'm not the person that can argu, that doesn't make me a child. ._.

Having the guts to say something? Thats nothing to be proud of, and you can have comebacks? Not to be proud of.

And why would you be ticked off? People are rating your map. Ok maybe I did rate your map kinda bad. But I get bad ratings on my map all the time. *cough Puffer cough* And I don't swear at them or tell them to suck my pole. I just accept it and try to make myself better. So your map is ok for a second map. If you continue to make maps you will get better.

Be a man and just take it. No need to flip out.

Throughout pawn your maps will get some negative ratings what are you gonna do? Start swearing at them like "stop being mean you -cencored- A-hole?" And do you know what that solves? ABSOLUTELY NOTHING and doesn't PROVE ANYTHING like this argument you started.

Lol it seems I can't argue but I look at what I just replied. o_O

Have anything to say? That's what I thought.

[jakef]

'wtf is this glitch i meant to move to the next screen so i can own, o wait their all the same... im leaving bye' ok lets get serious if u dont want to get yelled at by people that know wut they are talking about then quit posting your maps on forums, we dont care frankly if u got any worse than the last one or not, hopefully i was nice enough on this one for ya, bye bud

[PawnMember]

Wow I am not banned.
That just makes me laugh.

[Chickletman]

if it wasnt a double it wouldn't be in he middle and it would look retarded. whats so bad about them huh?


That's like some pot smoker saying,"What's so bad about weed?"
You might like it, but it's not accepted in our society lmao

That's the way double ladders are for maps, you might think they're great but the general population will disagree

Also, you could have just moved the ladders

[Near]

That's like some pot smoker saying,"What's so bad about weed?"
You might like it, but it's not accepted in our society lmao

That's the way double ladders are for maps, you might think they're great but the general population will disagree

Also, you could have just moved the ladders

Yea And You Didnt Have To Start Disin Everyone Cause They
Rated Your Map Accordingly.

Im Not The Kinda Guy That Gets Like This But What You
Said Ticked Me Off.

You Tell Us Not To Be Mean Yet Your Cussing Out Everyone.

Your Not Gonna Get Accepted Into This Community Like That
Trust Me.


Lozl And Dont Ask Where I Got Carrot I Was Thinking Of Somthing
Else And I Typed It But... I Guess That Was Pretty Bad xD.

[jakef]

Pawnmember your officially my favorite person here lol

[Cruzr]

Pawnmember your officially my favorite person here lol

Wtf, weren't you just dissing him?

[PawnMember]

Pawnmember your officially my favorite person here lol
I like to inspire the uninspirable.
FIGHT THE FUCKERS!

[Fweem]

Don't waste time fighting the soon-to-be-banned's.

[Cruzr]

Don't waste time fighting the soon-to-be-banned's.

Why not, what else do you have to do?

[tjraper]

dude, plz get a life, these people know wat they are talking about, they come in and rate them like they do ne other map, they give pointers and it may seem harsh, but its only constructive criticism they are NOT being mean, can u get it through ur head, and yes u are a child by acting this way, u will be banned soon if not already, get a life

[PawnMember]

1st Off I'm not on child dummy.
2nd I don't care.
3rd I don't care.

[tjraper]

oo, kidz got no comebacks, first off dummy is like kindergarten so u proved that theory, second off u used same thing twice and they werent good, third off u need friends, see the sun, it doesnt burn, trust me

[Tman340]

It god awful -8/5 too big no refils it sucks really bad

800th post

[PawnMember]

oo, kidz got no comebacks, first off dummy is like kindergarten so u proved that theory, second off u used same thing twice and they werent good, third off u need friends, see the sun, it doesnt burn, trust meI have friends.
Who do you think keeps telling me to keep burning you guys?

[EaEaEa]

this map makes me want to shoot myself

[shooter65]

this map makes me want to shoot myself

Lol thank you. XD

[Cruzr]

Lol thank you. XD

But....It wasn't funny....

[PawnMember]

See this is why you guys are dumb. You judge from the look. on map editor it looks boring but everyone I've played it with has liked it. May not look good but it is a fun map to play in.
Here I edited it a little.
http://i25.tinypic.com/210effb.jpg

[shooter65]

But....It wasn't funny....

Maybe not funny to you, but funny to me. ._.

Your map looks alot better than before. But still 3 x 3 maps are hard to make. And the reason everyone else was liking your map was because they were noobs. Noobs like crappy maps. But keep improoving. My new rating is 1/5.

[Cruzr]

Maybe not funny to you, but funny to me. ._.

Then you have a retarded sense of humor.....

[shooter65]

Then you have a retarded sense of humor.....

Different people have different senses of humor. And just because I find that one thing funny and you don't doesn't mean I have one sense of humor. I love all kinds of humor.

[Cruzr]

Different people have different senses of humor. And just because I find that one thing funny and you don't doesn't mean I have one sense of humor. I love all kinds of humor.

My humor could beat your humor in a fight...

[brohana]

See this is why you guys are dumb. You judge from the look. on map editor it looks boring but everyone I've played it with has liked it. May not look good but it is a fun map to play in.
Here I edited it a little.
http://i25.tinypic.com/210effb.jpg

You didnt post the code so we couldnt play it...


This version is better but its still not very good. Its repetitive, flat, and only 2 refills for a 3x3. Thats bad.

Just look at the servered maps (not arena and castle wars) and try to see what makes them so fun

[PawnMember]

Maybe not funny to you, but funny to me. ._.

Your map looks alot better than before. But still 3 x 3 maps are hard to make. And the reason everyone else was liking your map was because they were noobs. Noobs like crappy maps. But keep improoving. My new rating is 1/5.
they weren't noobs. it is a fun map.

You didnt post the code so we couldnt play it...


This version is better but its still not very good. Its repetitive, flat, and only 2 refills for a 3x3. Thats bad.

Just look at the servered maps (not arena and castle wars) and try to see what makes them so fun
see this guy gives nice advice.
will add more refills.

[HawtL33T]

Im gonna have to agree with the first - It's kidda bad...3x3 arent really good ideas for TDM/Assaults...more like Mazes
Spawns are too much, and are close by in every Screen
Ladders near eachother are not a good idea

But 2nd is better...
Single Ladder
Spawns arent Spreaded out
Kidda well map
Plain
But still 3x3...and that's not a good idea
So,

First: .5/5
Second: 4.5/10

Also, dont get Angry with people...i get low Rating for maps...and i just accept it (Not all the time)
Because most of this is a Flame War :eek:

- The "Hawt"
:rolleyes:

[Zeraninator]

wow... this thread made me laugh so hard...

your map gets a 2/10

Make it smaller and add obstacles like little pyramids or something.

And dude, it's just a map for a game. Settle the **** down.





pardon my french.

[Near]

It god awful -8/5 too big no refils it sucks really bad

800th post

Hahahaha I Love You Tman xD

And Plus Even The Redo Of Your Map Is Still Bad.

Its Too Open

To Little Refills

No Places To Really Attack From

And For Your Second Map Maybe Try Not Making 3x3 Maps
If YOu Make 1x1 Or 3x1 Their Maps You Start Of With
Cause Its Easyer To Get Into The Flow Of The Map That Was

[PawnMember]

Sure why not but I still find this map fun to play in.

[xxXDominoXxx]

Id probably love this map if it was smaller, had better gameplay, or was made with even an iota of creativity......

Oh well....

[islaydabest]

pile o' junk...
this is just pointless no one
would enjoy this game its too big..
maybe zone it down to a 2x2.
-.-

[Longgone]

This map is alright dude. Just try to make it smaller and less spawn points next time :)

[Puffer]

Reading though this thread made me lmao.

If you guys haven't noticed one thing this map is a rip.

V is the first one to invent this kind of map that has every screen looking the same.

That is what is creative about this map, but this noob ripped it off V.

I remember the first time V made this kind of map and the noobs were screaming because each screen looked the same.

[MEHELLO]

u just phailed

[drunkdestroyer]

Extremely Repetitive, Not many tiles, Flat, Basic Gameplay, All rooms Very similar Opposite Spawns Touching-its not a maze. Needs Originality, but dont give up!
One thing I do understand is the double ladders, they make sense, so leave them there.

[shooter65]

u just phailed

Don't bump threads. Just let them die.

[N00bKiller]

after reading all dat just wana say........................

lolz!!!:rolleyes:

[SniperAssasin08]

I think it looks like a pretty good map, but spread the spawns out, maybe if it was 2x2 it would be better?? 6.5/10 :)

[Bonk]

Uhh eww this makes me wanna upchuck.

[DaBoyz]

bonk i know u did this alot just to get ur post count up so far... but please man this thread is over 5 days old so i suggest u dont bump it :)

[V]

Totally stole this from me.

Ask anyone.

[Fweem]

V, when did you make your first one? I remember I had an assault with repetition.

But I do believe it's ripped off of you.

[DaBoyz]

:o He Stole This From You Gto!!!

[DAboyz11]

i loves maps

[ODST79]

its really nice just 2 things wheres the refils and its kinda plain work on that also other wise nice 8 outs 10 for 2 mistakes still nice

[DaBoyz]

lol wtf dude why do ur name look just like mine but with an 11 next to it :/

[V]

Fweem it was a big thing in beta.

[zenga]

Have You Read The Map Guides Yet.

NO Double Ladders.

Where Are The Refills.

Cant Really Hide.

Spawns Generaly Shouldent Be Besides On Another Ond Their Are Way To many Of Them.

Most 3x3 Maps Are Hard To Make Good But Still.

0.5/5


okay some ppl dont like campers so maye thats why theres no hiding spots and

3/5 or 7.5/10

[Marine22]

Have You Read The Map Guides Yet.

NO Double Ladders.

Where Are The Refills.

Cant Really Hide.

Spawns Generaly Shouldent Be Besides On Another Ond Their Are Way To many Of Them.

Most 3x3 Maps Are Hard To Make Good But Still.

0.5/5
agreed read map making guide 1 and 2 NAO!
rating: 0.1\10

[Ryuk]

I hate people who pose as big tough guys on the internet. They are bored and have nothing better to do.

[TacticalKiller1]

HATE cos So Flat, To Much Ladders and The Refills, also put some Camping Spots!
Rate: 0.1/5 Sorry Its So Boring! and so Big Map. Somekind of Hide a Seek to me!