New map, anyone want to revise?*Be Nice*

[Inkless1111]

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn187/inkless1111/OldVsNew-1.jpg



Does anyone have tips for the map? i dont really care about anyone's ratings because I know its not that good. I would just like to know what people like in a team deathmatch map.
i'll edit at the end of the day.

The description for this map:

Name: Old Vs New
Description: As the old world fights for thier own customs and thier own ways, industries pact in thier machinery. the cultural people do not like the new ways and want to keep thier traditions. As the new age forces change, the old age denies it. Fight back! the old need your help! so go to thier aid! (red). Help the industries convince the old to change. obviosly they are not a threat. take them out so we can make a new mall! (blue).
Info: a lot of spawn points at the top so a percentage will be there. it is hard to spawn kill because you can only do it in the middle part. the middle is the hotspot because people will drop from above, and climb from below. there is a central ladder and places to snipe if you ever get a hold on one.
V.2
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn187/inkless1111/OldVsNewV2.jpg
This is V.2 , its simple and everyone has a fair chance of winning. there is stile in the tile (lol...) and there are no ladders next 2 each other and its hard 2 spawn kill. is this one better than V.1? please speak up.
*If you need to, go ahead and rate it, because I know SOMEONE is going to.*

[arabftw123]

- Spawn camping.
- Tiles don't match.
- Kind of random.
- Too many spawns.
- Too open.
- Too flat.
- Bad gameplay.

I'm not going to rate this map because (a) you don't care about the rating and (b) it's not good. Try reading the map making guide and studying people's comments when they rate other maps.

[TacticalKiller1]

AraB is right u must read the map making guide i cant post my maps coz i dont have prntscrn kewboard tingy D:

[Inkless1111]

- Spawn camping.
- Tiles don't match.
- Kind of random.
- Too many spawns.
- Too open.
- Too flat.
- Bad gameplay.

I'm not going to rate this map because (a) you don't care about the rating and (b) it's not good. Try reading the map making guide and studying people's comments when they rate other maps.


"- Tiles don't match."
well, its most of the tiles that would normally look old. ad maybe from the 1800's
"- Kind of random."
supposed to go with all the old ages.
"- Too many spawns."
so it is hard to spawn kill.
"- Too open."
"- Too flat."
so you dont get lost. its easy to find someone , ad its hard to hold a good defensive position. ( i geuss i could make more levels and some stairs tho.)
"- Bad gameplay."
no response to that.

[manixxx]

I think u need correct mirroring.

[arabftw123]

"- Tiles don't match."
well, its most of the tiles that would normally look old. ad maybe from the 1800's
"- Kind of random."
supposed to go with all the old ages.
"- Too many spawns."
so it is hard to spawn kill.
"- Too open."
"- Too flat."
so you dont get lost. its easy to find someone , ad its hard to hold a good defensive position. ( i geuss i could make more levels and some stairs tho.)
"- Bad gameplay."
no response to that.
You can argue any single point I could put up their, or you could accept that I might know what I'm talking about and use the criticism to improve your map and your map making skills.

It's so annoying when people do this. Just take the critique in the spirit it was given and use it to improve.

[Inkless1111]

You can argue any single point I could put up their, or you could accept that I might know what I'm talking about and use the criticism to improve your map and your map making skills.

It's so annoying when people do this. Just take the critique in the spirit it was given and use it to improve.


thats just how i work. im sorry. yes i took your advice. im just not open minded and i dnt admit it. i edited and read the giude. now it looks semetrical.. pretty much...

[Puffer]

LMAO!

1/5, Read The Map Making Guide.

[Hyjal]

Lack of Tiles Themes
Refills in bad place
Too plain
Bottom seems too not get Refill(Or is it (F) )
Also, Lack of Ladders
Unsymmetrical

1/5

-Hyjal
:cool:

[Ravin]

You can argue any single point I could put up their, or you could accept that I might know what I'm talking about and use the criticism to improve your map and your map making skills.

It's so annoying when people do this. Just take the critique in the spirit it was given and use it to improve.

Thats why when I rate a map, I stick by my descisions...

Listen to what Arab has said and learn from it

Otherwise, nothing is gained from this thread..

He has mentioned everything so I believe I have nothing more to say...

0.5/10

[Inkless1111]

Version 2 is out. tips for the updated?

[FrogTaco]

Mirror Both sides so it's equally fair for both teams. It's like The Blue side has stairs and jumps while Red side has flat and open. Which side has it easier?

[Inkless1111]

Mirror Both sides so it's equally fair for both teams. It's like The Blue side has stairs and jumps while Red side has flat and open. Which side has it easier?

there both equal? especially V 2.

[Chickletman]

Reallly flat, and looks boring

Read the map making guide >:O
Keep working on it

[Inkless1111]

Reallly flat, and looks boring

Read the map making guide >:O
Keep working on it

umm... iv read the guide, but i'll keep working on it.

[Hamo]

unfortunatly i have nothign good to say keep trying and start again.

maybe read map guide 100 times lol

[Hellzfirez]

uhhhhmmm..
- It looks random >.>
- Too many Spawns
- Waste of Space
- Spawn camping
- Flat