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IrishDragon1234
06-16-2008, 01:42 PM
This is a new map I just made. I cannot think of a good name for it at the moment but for now I will call it "Junkyardigans".
[img=http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/166/pawnmapscreenshotofjunkfa4.th.png] (http://img144.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pawnmapscreenshotofjunkfa4.png)
The map code is:
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Please rate my map on a scale of 1-10. Please give me tips on how I could improve the map and make it better. I'm open to being critisized but only if you keep it constructive. Enjoy!:D

PawnMobilizer
06-16-2008, 02:18 PM
Crane pieces are bad in castle tiles.
Too much spawn raping.

templar600
06-16-2008, 02:57 PM
i agree with pawnmoblizer but keep on updating your map

Puffer
06-17-2008, 12:13 AM
2/5.

Your use of space is impeccable. But keep up the designs.