My first map.

[LETSgoTACObell]

I know it probobly sucks, but here it is anyways. The boxes are the ones you can hide in.
http://i27.tinypic.com/ae2zx0.jpg

[Pope]

Lots of things wrong here, mate.
1. Spawn Glitches
2. Screen Glitches
3. Crouch Jumping
4. Too many refils
5. Way to flat
6. Way to crowded
7. Ugly set-up
8. Bad Gameplay

Phew. It is your first, so you do not get penelyzed. It is not very good, it actually sucks. 1/10.

[LETSgoTACObell]

lol thanks. i dont really care though. i was just bored out of my mind when i made it.

[Pope]

Try reading Live's map making guide.

[LETSgoTACObell]

Ok, will do.