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Soul
05-28-2008, 07:20 PM
Ok I tried adding what you guys said so Hope you don't hate it.

http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff198/rscraze/ghfgjty-1.jpg

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This is only my second map so please go easy, I don't mind cronstructive critisism but please don't go, OMGZB N00bz u FAilz.

dz23
05-28-2008, 07:32 PM
Bad layout
Need more spawn points.
Too crowded.
Bad gameplay.
Tiles do not match.
Too many ladders.

It seems worse.
Read the map making guide.

xjohanlawrencex
05-28-2008, 07:33 PM
ok well usually i like to be postive but wow..i think dz got it down finally xD

arabftw123
05-28-2008, 07:34 PM
- Too crowded.
- Tiles don't match.
- Looks boring.
- Bad gameplay.

Please read the Map Making Guide.

th3mast3r
05-28-2008, 07:39 PM
Bad, But not too bad for a 2nd map..

Bad spawns, Unsymmetrical, Bad refils, Useless ladders, Over use of unnecessary tiles.

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Puffer
05-29-2008, 03:01 AM
Far too messy and badly planned out.