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Desipio
05-28-2008, 03:18 PM
Wow I didnt realise I hadn't posted this when I went on my Map Posting Rampage.

So here it is.

Urban


The red dots signal a COLLIDABLE block.


http://i288.photobucket.com/albums/ll188/PawngameScreenshots/Urban.png


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KINGofDARKNESS
05-28-2008, 03:21 PM
Bad map. Glitch on the bottom spawns.Bad refill locations. 5/10

Desipio
05-28-2008, 03:31 PM
Erm, if you had read the text above the map you would see that the bottom spawns are NOT glitchable.

Anywho, code has been posted, But i ask that you dont edit and claim it as your own.

Ravin
05-28-2008, 03:36 PM
Desipio meant Collidable as in a CF tile...
It cant be glitched because only one tile surrounds it(above)
At least 2 have to surround it to make it glitch(Cold Front is a good example of this)

For some reason I dont like it :-/
I cant think why though

Swap the spawns again :-|
Flat in quite a few areas

6/10

Desipio
05-28-2008, 03:49 PM
Flat isnt all that bad. If you look at the maps that we have servered now. Almost every single one is flat.

Look at Abyss and Wars Playground. They are as flat as a squirrel that just got hit by a bus.

This map has jumps in it, that turn into flat little platforms. And the space is well used. So i think your 6/10 is uncalled for, and just plain embarrassing. =/

dz23
05-28-2008, 05:20 PM
~Quite falt in some areas.
~Bad layout.
~Bad gameplay.
7/10

Desipio
05-28-2008, 05:22 PM
Have you played it?
No

So how can the gamplay be bad.

ill take my 7/10 though

Gir581
05-28-2008, 05:48 PM
its alright but i dont like it that much the tiles seem weird 2 me.
7/10 great though and i dont think it is that flat like he said sometimes it is ok. i mean look at castle wars in the middle.

Pope
05-28-2008, 06:13 PM
Des I don't know why you are criticising critiques, but they are in the best intention. It is a good looking map, but maybe the "F" blocks where overused. Don't like the refils or the spawns but I like the middle screens. I don't agree flatness is a problem. 2.8/5.

Trademark
05-28-2008, 06:35 PM
I think it's worth a 8/10 but I'm not the map expert

I'm sure live or puffer can give you some good feedback though

Desipio
05-28-2008, 08:20 PM
Live has never commented on my maps. Nor has Puffer.

Puffer
05-29-2008, 03:07 AM
Tile Flow is a fail here.

Lots of accessible routes make a big hunt around this map.

Refills could have been located better, bottom ones are in a horrible location an people will just camp there with an SG.

The sides resemble an old 2x2 map I made.

And to be honest, this map is not your best. 1.3/5.

Desipio
05-29-2008, 02:44 PM
:'(

Damn rough critism from Puffer.

Tman340
05-29-2008, 06:13 PM
its bad 3/10 also quit making tons of threads about your maps. make a thread with like 4 or 5 maps.

Desipio
05-30-2008, 12:34 AM
No thanks ill be sure to post more than 1 thread because they get more views.

and i wont take your 3/10 as a honest rating because it seems to me you dont like me. and you dont know anything about map making.

TacticalKiller1
05-30-2008, 04:25 AM
Hmmz... Quite Confusing To Me Some Ladders Are near Each other I'll Rate it 2.5/5

PenguinOwns
05-30-2008, 04:47 AM
not bad.
make it so the red dots are the f ones though its confusing :S
also try work on your gameplay a bit.

dz23
05-30-2008, 09:29 AM
Oh, ya and dont forget to change the main tile blocks to something else.
Those tiles are mostly for the ground, not the entire map.

Desipio
05-30-2008, 09:39 AM
You've got your tiles wrong.

thats a SPACE backround block,
not the VOLCANO CF block.

dz23
05-30-2008, 12:41 PM
Have you played it?
No

So how can the gamplay be bad.

ill take my 7/10 though

I am saying bad gameplay cuz I imagine myself in it.
It just doesn't seem to get my interest.
Not all maps are perfect.

Desipio
05-30-2008, 12:42 PM
Copy the map code, and play it sometime, its quite fun.

dz23
05-30-2008, 12:46 PM
It might be.
But oh no.
I don't have a code.
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Really the biggest problem I see than any other problems is the tiles.
I don't like how you used that urban tile for the whole map.
Change the main tile up a bit but still leave some of it though.

Can I have code?
Let me try gameplay.

Desipio
05-30-2008, 12:48 PM
It should be posted, look at the first post.

dz23
05-30-2008, 01:04 PM
It should be posted, look at the first post.

K thanks.
I bet the gameplay must be good, I am taking your word for it.
Hey, befriend me.:D
I am trying to get all of the map making people to be my friend.
I will act nicer to you and give you a cookie.:D

Tman340
05-30-2008, 04:33 PM
No thanks ill be sure to post more than 1 thread because they get more views.

and i wont take your 3/10 as a honest rating because it seems to me you dont like me. and you dont know anything about map making.


excuse me noob i know map maing i know a hell of alot more than you do noob. i have made maps been in contests and almost won one if it wasn't dropped, so you can go shut up and show some repsect you peice of crap.

SniperScare
05-30-2008, 05:07 PM
Looks like a well map their
3.5/5
some of the F, i guarenteed, are not needed their, or was that for the fun of the map?

dz23
05-30-2008, 06:14 PM
Tman340 don't flame.
You are not in the map making team so...
Let's see you amke a better map than desipio then if you think you're so tough.