MY map, plz rate

[evan342]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v687/ramsfan57/untitled123-1.jpg

plz rate and critique it
NOTE: i read the MMG so yea...

gimme pro's and con's plz

[Ravin]

The Jungle Boxes you've used to build the wall of both 'bases' shouldn't have grass on the bottom of them if they are off of the ground :-/
Tile Layering on the trees are poor
Too Flat in the middle
Too many ladders in my opinion. They are also way too long
Gameplay is slightly scattered :-/
Its ok for a First Map
2.8/5:)

[evan342]

how could i improve in my next map?

[Gatling]

how could i improve in my next map?

By doing trying to improve these...



The Jungle Boxes you've used to build the wall of both 'bases' shouldn't have grass on the bottom of them if they are off of the ground :-/
Tile Layering on the trees are poor
Too Flat in the middle
Too many ladders in my opinion. They are also way too long
Gameplay is slightly scattered :-/

Its ok for a First Map
2.8/5:)

[evan342]

ok....? (10)

[kasims]

2/5 good for a first map mines look worse :O

[evan342]

what do u rate it gatling?

[Gatling]

I give it a 5/10.

Spawn points look kind of cramped and there are a ton of ladders with little footspace.

[evan342]

is 5/10 go for first map?

[Gatling]

Yep... ratings are often inaccurate since they are just numbers.

I would focus on the comments and critiques.

[Ravin]

What he said :D!!

Also try to get people like Puffer and Wolfhowlz opinions on a map because they know a lot about maps and have been creating great maps since he beginning of time...

[Galm]

It's okay, bit small and alot has been scattered...

6.5/10 :D

Not bad for a first map :)

[evan342]

thanks :D ten char

[dz23]

The map looks kind of fun though.
I like maps with outdoor in it.

[Puffer]

Change the themes to one tile first.

The bases are just bad.

[kasims]

Yea lol i agree with gatling rating is opinions :D