My first ever map!

[Doanster6]

This is my first ever map. Please say constructive criticism, if any (which i guarantee there will be), if you must criticise at all.

The bricks on the top of the map in the tunnel have 100hp each.
The bricks for the fortress wall at very bottom have 500hp each.

I hope you like it.


http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll25/doanster6/pawn.jpg

[dz23]

~Boring map.
~Too much open space.
~Too much HP put into the blocks.
~Too flat.
~Blue team knows where red team can come threw so red team will get spawn camped.
~Assault map is too easy.

[Gatling]

The artifact is just sitting there. You might want to protect it slightly more in the future.

[FrostyPenguin]

~Boring map.
~Too much open space.
~Too much HP put into the blocks.
~Too flat.
~Blue team knows where red team can come threw so red team will get spawn camped.
~Assault map is too easy.

Dam I can't think of anything else to say. You've took the words right out of my mouth.

[Tman340]

not too bad but the top needs top be fixed. 7/10

[superpotatopwns]

-flat on bottom
-red gunna get spawn killed
- very easy for red 2 win
-gunna take 4ever 2 get through tunnel
-borin layout
3.5/10

[arabftw123]

- Too flat.
- It would take forever to destroy all those tiles.
- Artifact is too exposed.
- Too easy for Red to be Spawn Camped.
- Spawns touching is a no-no.

Please read the Map Making Guide.

[Bunny89]

Red wins!!! sorry I don't like it.

[Puffer]

Take most of the advise given above. Which some of it is inaccurate. -.-

You have a Mirrored Artifact Glitch which will give a person who knows how to do it instant victory. That is your biggest main issue right now.

[kasims]

Not So Great Sorry

[Ravin]

~Boring map.
~Too much open space.
~Too much HP put into the blocks.
~Too flat.
~Blue team knows where red team can come threw so red team will get spawn camped.
~Assault map is too easy.

Pretty much everything

Oh and you dont want to have destructives everywhere
Just a few will suffice ;)

[StopAndStare]

Not too great, but for a first map it's not too bad.

[dz23]

Dam I can't think of anything else to say. You've took the words right out of my mouth.

I just look for something wrong everytime.