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circa87
04-06-2008, 11:34 PM
Two new'ins.
A vector and a.. normal one.
Worked on the vector for 1 hour and the normal for 45 minutes.
Hope it worked out.
Don't criticize it..
Shameless
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/RobinPwnsMe/Shameless.png
Dark Widow
http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc52/RobinPwnsMe/Darkwidow.png
hhhhhhholmes
04-06-2008, 11:37 PM
Don't really like these 2 tbh. First just looks like a repeated render with color manipulation and crappy text. Second, just looks like u took a stock, slapped 2
c4d's on the right and the left, and called it a sig. Seems as though your work is starting to get a bit worse. No offense ofcourse.
circa87
04-06-2008, 11:44 PM
Wow.....
Wa-ha-ha-hooooowww.....
I'm SOOOOO tired of people telling me what I did and didn't do.
Either tell me what to do and improve on, or just don't post!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!
EITHER TELL ME WHAT TO DO/IMPROVE ON OR DON'T POST AT ALL!
PLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEE!
vSkyzv
04-06-2008, 11:48 PM
Wow.....
Wa-ha-ha-hooooowww.....
I'm SOOOOO tired of people telling me what I did and didn't do.
Either tell me what to do and improve on, or just don't post!
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!
EITHER TELL ME WHAT TO DO/IMPROVE ON OR DON'T POST AT ALL!
PLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEE!
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/opinion (http://www.youfail.org/)
Calm down here. He was just stating his opinion.
hhhhhhholmes
04-06-2008, 11:48 PM
Work on ur overall fx, bg's, coloring, lighting, and text. Happy..?
KazDone
04-07-2008, 01:31 AM
LOL @ Holmess.
I just sighs and walks away like a true O.G.
-KD
maggerz
04-07-2008, 07:41 AM
Well, the c4ds used aren't much to look at, and all you did was just
stock, pattern, paint in black, smudge, add c4ds.
The first is very repetitive, try making it about 3 guys. Adding a light source won't hurt, just place it right or BOOM! noob tag.
circa87
04-07-2008, 05:33 PM
Okay, Mag...
On the second, I added stock, added C4D, paint brush on color, add another C4D, 10 adjustment layers, apply image, duplicate that layer, flip it, move, erase it, 5 more adjustment layers, a few (maybe 3) color/burn layers.
People...nevermind. I am much more experienced and talented than you think!
Anyway, of course it is repetitive. I got inspiration from a tag like that.
brohana
04-07-2008, 06:26 PM
1st- Colored jackets randomly pasted? text is cool, but it distracts to much from the jackets. Overall effects and appeal is definently a turn off.
2nd- Is that a fence behind here? huh. C4D usage sucks, the symmetricalness makes it boring. The C4Ds are cut-off on the sides, making some very obvious negative space.
These are DEFINENTLY not you best
SketchZ
04-07-2008, 07:32 PM
1- There is no one focal.. everything's scattered you can improve it by making a focal.. and colors are random. Also after one of the jackets, there's a bright red, blue.
2- Not feeling it, looks like you just added c4ds to a stock. If not, tell me otherwise what you did... Blue = No go on the sig.
And God,.. If you dont want critism don't post?
beanmiester
04-07-2008, 08:42 PM
.
And God,.. If you dont want critism don't post?
Thats what I've been saying...
Glad to see I'm not the only one who thinks it.
hhhhhhholmes
04-07-2008, 09:33 PM
Lol, I know what you feel as well. When ppl critique ur work, just take it and move on..
JediLucas5
04-07-2008, 09:38 PM
1st one doesn't even look like a vector to me. Not liking it's concept. Not much TOO tell you to improve about, so I guess try not to spam your artwork with colorful hoodies?
2nd one has a pretty cool concept, the focal needs to be blended more and the highlight needs to be toned down though.
luka102
04-08-2008, 02:35 AM
Okay, Mag...
On the second, I added stock, added C4D, paint brush on color, add another C4D, 10 adjustment layers, apply image, duplicate that layer, flip it, move, erase it, 5 more adjustment layers, a few (maybe 3) color/burn layers.
People...nevermind. I am much more experienced and talented than you think!
Anyway, of course it is repetitive. I got inspiration from a tag like that.
you use WAY too many steps and get BERY little results.
beanmiester
04-08-2008, 02:45 AM
you use WAY too many steps and get BERY little results.
Good way to say it.
luka102
04-08-2008, 10:01 PM
lol, TY i like to be short and simple
circa87
04-09-2008, 12:18 AM
1- There is no one focal.. everything's scattered you can improve it by making a focal.. and colors are random. Also after one of the jackets, there's a bright red, blue.
2- Not feeling it, looks like you just added c4ds to a stock. If not, tell me otherwise what you did... Blue = No go on the sig.
And God,.. If you dont want critism don't post?
I do want criticism, constructive criticism like you just posted and Brohana.
Not people telling me what the frick I did to my own friggin' signature. I know!
Anyway, on the first the focal is the 5 hoodies in the front. And, yes, I know. There are pink, blue, and red lines behind the last hoodie on the focal.
I had to manipulate those colors, fyi. Just saying. Not as easy as it looks. Plus, vectored.
On the second, it's not just a C4D on a stock. It's more.
It's okay, though. I know these aren't my best, I'm just seeing what people think.
hhhhhhholmes
04-09-2008, 09:43 PM
Hey, I'm glad you admit that they're not ur best, but they're still pretty dang good. Anyways, I really wasn't commenting on hard it looked, mostly just commenting on how it looked. Sorry if it seemed I was judging by how difficult it looked. Ur a great sig maker, just don't let other ppls opinions get u down.
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