The Factory Beta

[IbanezBassist]

The Factory Beta

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/305/thefactory0yw4.jpg

Also Coldfront Fortress

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3307/coldfrontfortess0yz4.jpg

[EggoWaffle]

Woah that is like your first map? If not then i give it a 2/10 too open and the creative. If it is i give a 5/10.

[IbanezBassist]

Nah I just sit down and create stuff. I'll make another hold on :D

[systemX5132]

First one: too much wasted space, too flat in some areas, the tiles don't flow, and you shouldn't have crouch jumps or ladder crouch jumps in your maps.

Second One: Tile flow is better, but it is WAAAYYY too tight and flat.

[IbanezBassist]

Thanks I guess. I really didnt read the Map Making guide. :(

[Hyjal]

1st Map:
2/5=40%
Different themes in a 3x3...not really good lookin
2 Camping areas(Mid Left screen and Right)

[Hyjal]

2nd Map
4/5=80%
Kept a balance of 2 Themes
No Camping Spawn areas
Looks well

[IbanezBassist]

2nd Map
4/5=80%
Kept a balance of 2 Themes
No Camping Spawn areas
Looks well

Thanks. I guess :eek:

[Hyjal]

Thanks. I guess :eek:

YVeryW...
:D

[IbanezBassist]

Yes I'm guna try and take your advice. Lets talk.

[Hyjal]

Uhh...and when would that be?

[Puffer]

Too open in game play areas.

The map its self doesn't seem to play too well, as well as being flat.

Crouch jumps really interfere in your maps.