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[gtsman]

My first map/first post.
Old version.
http://i25.tinypic.com/16l0o4n.jpg



tell me what to improve.

New version:
http://i26.tinypic.com/rlkr4m.jpg

Improvements wich i made:
-6 ammo crates
-2 spawn points
-Some crates have been changed so i dont only have the arrow up crates.
-Removed the cloud background (i need a good background what background = best? (1,2,3,4,5?)
(i have'nt updated the canopy tunnel because i cant find any other good like tunnel tiles...)
PS:NEED A NAME FOR THIS MAP.

[patriotsrock]

Use some different tiles, um 5/10.
Good for 1st map though

[gtsman]

wich tiles shall i change?
-the tunnel
-boxes
-the air platform
-ladders
-background

[arabftw123]

Hmm.. not bad. But I would do a little more to liven it up. 6/10. Still, not bad for a first map.

[gtsman]

its not my first i made but my first i posted.

[Koheran]

You should probably put some Refills in there.

[Dthen]

Not bad, you need to put a couple crates up the top though. :)

[urnerds101]

well you should probably change the backround of clouds to a default backround or something


The space tile boxes on the top are ugly and dont fit.


The canopy tiles...i Know what you were trying to do with them. But they dont fit wel,try using a different tile type for the tunnel thing i just dont like the canopy tiles there..


Am i blind or are there no ammo crates? you should put some in for sure


keep working and you will get better it's not a bad map just not a good one.

[gtsman]

thanx for the help, but there are not many other cave like tiles so thats why the canopy tiles.,going to change the space tiles (also background)

Ps: the ammo crates are there but i didnt update it yet

[poe101591]

puts some holes in the top so the people that can't jump fall to the ground :)

[PenguinOwns]

heh. strange map.. looks quite fun to play i suppose anyway tiles look bad and gameplay isnt very ... advanced??
4/10

[weedr]

My first map/first post.

http://i25.tinypic.com/16l0o4n.jpg



tell me what to improve.

Improvements wich i made:
-ammo crates.
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-
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Also id like to have a good name for this map.(i was thinking of a name like: Frontier.
game play looks...okay.i like the setup.. which boxes are see through and which are not?

[gtsman]

uploading new version now,thx for tips.

[Hyjal]

My first map/first post.

http://i25.tinypic.com/16l0o4n.jpg



tell me what to improve.

Improvements wich i made:
-ammo crates.
-
-
-

Also id like to have a good name for this map.(i was thinking of a name like: Frontier.

Battle for >Insert Name Here<
Wait a few...gonna flame and see sum stuff

[Hyjal]

Map:
3/5=60%
Top Bridge-Make a drop Before or after hole you made...Possible Airborne Camping up there
kidda hate sum themes added to it-I.E: Space Boxes,Wood Background under Earth Tiles

[Hyjal]

2nd -Improvement-
4.8/5=9.6
Better improvement-I.E: Stick with a few themes then 20
Added Refills...Possibly 2 are in a Spawn Area...but 4/6 is better
Anything i forget?

[gtsman]

2nd -Improvement-
4.8/5=9.6
Better improvement-I.E: Stick with a few themes then 20
Added Refills...Possibly 2 are in a Spawn Area...but 4/6 is better
Anything i forget?


Thx for the high score=).

[Hyjal]

Thx for the high score=).
YveryW,gtsman

[gtsman]

i have opened my level in the game (its called Frontier by the way.)

[Puffer]

Okay for a first map.

Name can be Hide N' Seek.

[Pizzoid]

less open spaces. you should throw in a few differences too. the fact its all the same makes it a little blah. try looking at some maps posted by masterkillergod

[Phanto69]

they look cool,

[poolchamp]

Change background to 3 the night sky and call it night fight, then take out a lot of refills to prevent camping and it will be much better.Right now I give it 4.5/10 once you improve ill rating would be 7/10 the last 3 need to be your own originally and creativity. GOOD LUCK!