Kill Zone

[hhhhhhholmes]

Made this just messin around.

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z212/hhhhhhholmes/KillZone.png

C&C

[GangLeader]

eh its ok.
text is hard to see

[hhhhhhholmes]

Didn't want the text to be too distracting from the focal. Anything else?

[urnerds101]

XD well it worked i didnt even see the text lol i like it its kinda diferent from others. and i just wanna know whats that lil gold thing in the center bottom? thats kinda distractin lol

[blondie]

Again, show the chest more, just looks more appealing.




Don't add text, in any of your tags. It usually looks better without.

[maggerz]

little flow... text is extremely hard to see, show the chest more too.

[hhhhhhholmes]

Kinda sucks, the stock didn't show his chest at all. It showed head up and some chopters or w/e in the bg. Oh, I dunno what's up with the gold thing, I didn't even see it until you pointed it out, lol.

[SketchZ]

The text isn't that noticeable, and.. if you do notice it.. it's hard to read. The gold thing catches my eye more than the focal should.. O_O

[WolfHowlz]

i dont like how the render is choppy