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mercyking
02-17-2008, 04:14 PM
well i think am gettin better...

my computer froze so i couldnt finsh but heres the unfinsh outcome

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o135/sniper534/saved.jpg
c&c
troll
02-17-2008, 04:30 PM
You can do better than that.

Doesnt blend, seems forced.
JediLucas5
02-17-2008, 06:08 PM
The render needs to be bigger, for some reason her boobs are pretty distracting also......wtf is wrong with them LOL! Anyways, you are getting a lot better Sniper! Keep it up.
mercyking
02-17-2008, 07:56 PM
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o135/sniper534/finshed.png

well here wht i finshed with...lol and jedi it looks bad with the render big...<_<
GangLeader
02-18-2008, 05:41 AM
big improvment! just work on text
WhiteRanger
02-18-2008, 08:29 AM
really good, your getting better then me mate...but read some text tuts :D
`alex out
maggerz
02-18-2008, 08:50 AM
Her boobs are soooooooooo distracting....
Blend it a bit more, and it will very good.
AnOddName
02-18-2008, 04:30 PM
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o135/sniper534/finshed.png



Remove the text.
Or change it.
NOW.
:D
Eiliosdraye
02-18-2008, 04:38 PM
That text is in your face and HUGE... TERRIBLE!

AON is right. GET RID OF THE TEXT OR CHANGE IT NOW!

6/10 WITH text

8/1o WITHOUT text. Move the render a bit down so you can see her face better for a 9/10.
brohana
02-18-2008, 04:43 PM
Is the face blurred and the boobs sharpened?

Cause thats what it looks like