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mrpopular
02-17-2008, 12:38 AM
Hi i'm sourght of a gfxer i guess.. anyways this is my first post and this is my newest sig

http://i27.tinypic.com/91bfgg.png

beanmiester
02-17-2008, 02:29 AM
Hmmm please post how long you've been doing gfx next time so I can give a more accurate critique :)

Anyways the whole sig seems monotone to me with parts of the render over saturated.

The dark parts of colors aren't that attractive either.

The tag is rather flat but you did seem to execute flow nicely.

Try to work on colors and lighting at the moment.

Also not every tag needs text :)

If your here long enough you'll see that most of my tags don't have text b/c it would ruin them. That might be b/c I suck at text though...

AdamRainey
02-17-2008, 10:23 AM
I think it's nice.

The background really makes me think. It's creative.

Maybe if you'd erase some parts of that adjustment layer, it would be better.

How long have you been making tags?

mrpopular
02-17-2008, 11:21 AM
I've been making these for like 2 months i'd have to say..

also (this is sourght of off topic) Beanmister i like your sig

maggerz
02-17-2008, 11:42 AM
You've been making GFX for two months?! [/offtopic]

Lighting and Bg is very good, and you're gradient map usage is pwnage

hhhhhhholmes
02-17-2008, 11:56 AM
Wow, 2 months? ur better than I was like, half a year into it. I'm guessing u read a lot of tuts? Anywho, the colors are a bit monotone and the render isn't very well blended. Love the text though, better than I can ever get it to be like >.< Gj, and keep at it.

mrpopular
02-17-2008, 12:01 PM
Thanks everyy one!!! i do read a lot of tuts cuz i like doing this.

Andrew02111
02-17-2008, 12:09 PM
Wow 2 months?

I wasn't as good as that since about 4 months. >_>

Gj. It pwns.

beanmiester
02-17-2008, 12:47 PM
Hmm well I posted my first sig at 11-14-2007, 09:18 PM

I really can't remember the exact date today but I'm guessing it's the middle of feburary.

That puts me at around 3 months :)

Anyways mainly work on your composistion (How you put your sig together) and colors.

JediLucas5
02-17-2008, 06:19 PM
Hmm well I posted my first sig at 11-14-2007, 09:18 PM

I really can't remember the exact date today but I'm guessing it's the middle of feburary.

That puts me at around 3 months :)

Anyways mainly work on your composistion (How you put your sig together) and colors.

Remember though, you got PS like right after you started so you had a great advantage.



Thats pretty good for only doing it for two months. The text needs work though.

brohana
02-17-2008, 08:15 PM
Nice job, The lighting is alittle overpowerful but well done

The Negative space is also alittle overpowered

Try adding in some curves or levels adjustment layers

Just try to balance it

The render is great and pretty HQ

Work on blending too, your render is kinda sitting there


So pretty much work on balancing the negative and positive space, text, and blending

mrpopular
02-17-2008, 08:35 PM
thanks everyone