New tag (Best?) [CLASS]

[hhhhhhholmes]

I think this is my best tag yet. Any1 like to agree or disagree?

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z212/hhhhhhholmes/Purity3.png

C&C and Class

P.S. Ty Kaz and Bro for the advice!

[AdamRainey]

Ew.

Not your best!

Colors don't go. Really bad stock/render.

Smudgy is kind of chalky.

Random stuff to the left doesn't compliment it, either.

Solid Novice

[beanmiester]

I'm feeling lazy so heres teh same thing from nsl lol :p

The transistion from white to orange could be a bit better.

The focal could also not be so far to the left maybe a little more to the right just so it isn't right on the edge.

The mouth looking thing is distracting from the focal as well.

There don't seem to be much going on but you said it's a work in progress right?

Looks like your off to a good start

I'd say novice.

[hhhhhhholmes]

Lol? Anyways, for Adam, I meant that texture. And for Bean, well, just read NSL, lol.

[GangLeader]

i think ur half life ur best.
8/10
solid novice

[blondie]

Wasn't this in another thread?

[beanmiester]

He made two.

This one and one asking for advice.

I just noticed that so umm I'll lock this one.