PAWN Communites Official Novel Writing Syndicate

[JediLucas5]

Pawngame's Official Book Writing Company-

Members - Irockj00ssockz, JL5, and Wolfhowlz

Why - To learn Reading and writing skills, and to increase your vocabulary 25%.

How to apply - Write an exciting introduction to the topic: Looking into your dead brother's face, and I'll post if your accepted and add you to the list.

Why we are doing this - Because it is a fun way for Other people and I to waste their time.

Request Station -

Title -
How to be written (Poetic, Narrative, etc.) -
Mood/tone -
How long -
Topic -

Note: No flaming this subject, and right now, I need someone to make this post nice;edit it on your on and preview or live. Also, you may not be accepted due to poor Linguistic skill.


Happy writing... And things.


This weeks theme: Evil, Darkness, and Treachery.

[JediLucas5]

REposted: Because iRock was banned and he couldnt edit anything.

[WolfHowlz]

Looking into your dead brother's face, I realized that now he just now had a moments of peace. I'm sorry I couldn't do more for him as he lay on the cold cement, screaming for his family. Regretfully I admit that I was a coward. Sitting on the opposite side of the jail. My eyes cast down. Trying so hard to not say a word. For what? To save my own freaking hide! He had something. He was someone. I on the other hand hand nothing to lose. . By the time you get this letter, I will have gone. I owe you my life. Blood for blood. I will track those bastards down, and slit their throats, till they can bleed no more. My soul is gone. I have bleed my soul out.

[vSkyzv]

I take back what I said.

[WolfHowlz]

I take back what I said.
what did you say? something about me?

[vSkyzv]

what did you say? something about me?
I wold never do that :D.

As we see here IRockJ00Socks has been banned. With that he valiantly decides to violate the terms to playing Pawn by evading his suspension from Pawn. He with his ban is incapable of recruiting new members. Therefore he calls on JediLucas5 to create a new thread. Despite JediLucas5's efforts towards the creation of a new thread, I - HonorP00ner - will not join this "waste of time" as IRockJ00Socks has called it :p. lol...

[WolfHowlz]

ah ok..so who gets in and who doesnt? or will we have to wait forever

[Pooshonmyshoos]

As an officially official unofficially unofficall offically assosiated with the Writers Guild of America, I hereby call a strike!

[BANGdead]

As an officially official unofficially unofficall offically assosiated with the Writers Guild of America, I hereby call a strike!

Looking into your dead brother's face, Beanmiester out of nowhere ruins the momment lol =]

[Eiliosdraye]

Looking at your dead brothers face, i saw in shock a horrified expression, one of sheer terror. I looked around and saw a lion glaring at me with hatred and malice in it's eyes, i breathed heavily and bolted, but the lion was faster, it leapt and tackled me to the ground. I took out my hunting knife and stabbed it, and saw the exact same look of pure horror that i saw on your dead brothers face.

[WolfHowlz]

As an officially official unofficially unofficall offically assosiated with the Writers Guild of America, I hereby call a strike!

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HERE! HERE!..I guess...

[Eiliosdraye]

lols wolf..

Meh, mine is bettar.

[WolfHowlz]

lols wolf..

Meh, mine is bettar.
aw come on..my story pwns :P
and what writer spells better ''bettar''

[BANGdead]

Looking into my dead brother's face. I stared at the killer in my dead brother's eyes. The murderer. The monster. I picked him up and tried to look for someone to help. The cold arms, the cold legs, the cold body. I cried as I ran. Then behind me was a sound. A sound of heavy breathing. Huuuh-Huoooh, Huuuu-Huoooh. I stared to run faster. He was catching up. Then I dropped down from tiredness. I laid my brother down. Now me and the killer is staring, face-to-face, eye-to-eye. Then my eyes targeted a huge rock near me. The killer was about to strike until I threw the rock to his head.

[WolfHowlz]

Looking into your dead brother's face. I stared at the killer in my dead brother's eyes. The murderer. The monster. I picked him up and tried to look for someone to help. The cold arms, the cold legs, the cold body. I cried as I ran. Then behind me was a sound. A sound of heavy breathing. Huuuh-Huoooh, Huuuu-Huoooh. I stared to run faster. He was catching up. Then I dropped down from tiredness. I laid my brother down. Now me and the killer is staring, face-to-face, eye-to-eye. Then my eyes targeted a huge rock near me. The killer was about to strike untill I through the rock to his head.
hes your brother and my brother? you contridict yourself

[BANGdead]

hes your brother and my brother? you contridict yourself

My story is teh pwnz.

[WolfHowlz]

Your First Sentence Is A Fragment

[BANGdead]

Oh whoops...took me 5 looks to find that out.

[WolfHowlz]

oh and its i threw the rock..not i through <_< (sorry for being the english tutor)

[BANGdead]

Aw sorry teacher...I was busy with my Dog Report lol...American Foxhound FTW

[troll]

Looking into my dead brother's face i go ewww!

[WolfHowlz]

man..that just sucked...how does he go ewww <_<

[troll]

Take it all in.

My writing style is very deep, and you have to understand it all.O_O

[WolfHowlz]

Take it all in.

My writing style is very deep, and you have to understand it all.O_O
oh oka! *goes back to sleep*

[BANGdead]

Looking into my dead brother's face i go ewww!

Very Touching...*cries*

[Bilehd92]

Looking into my dead brother's face i go ewww!

Wow....So deep and emotional....I couldn't resist but to praise your writing. Such meticulous word choice and a great build up to the climax scene....I love it.

[JediLucas5]

Looking into your dead brother's face, I realized that now he just now had a moments of peace. I'm sorry I couldn't do more for him as he lay on the cold cement, screaming for his family. Regretfully I admit that I was a coward. Sitting on the opposite side of the jail. My eyes cast down. Trying so hard to not say a word. For what? To save my own freaking hide! He had something. He was someone. I on the other hand hand nothing to lose. . By the time you get this letter, I will have gone. I owe you my life. Blood for blood. I will track those bastards down, and slit their throats, till they can bleed no more. My soul is gone. I have bleed my soul out.

Accepted, great paragraph, though it needs work on the introductory, I'll accept

[JediLucas5]

Looking at your dead brothers face, i saw in shock a horrified expression, one of sheer terror. I looked around and saw a lion glaring at me with hatred and malice in it's eyes, i breathed heavily and bolted, but the lion was faster, it leapt and tackled me to the ground. I took out my hunting knife and stabbed it, and saw the exact same look of pure horror that i saw on your dead brothers face.

Declined, you need a lot more lead ins and transitions throughout your paragraph

[JediLucas5]

Looking into my dead brother's face. I stared at the killer in my dead brother's eyes. The murderer. The monster. I picked him up and tried to look for someone to help. The cold arms, the cold legs, the cold body. I cried as I ran. Then behind me was a sound. A sound of heavy breathing. Huuuh-Huoooh, Huuuu-Huoooh. I stared to run faster. He was catching up. Then I dropped down from tiredness. I laid my brother down. Now me and the killer is staring, face-to-face, eye-to-eye. Then my eyes targeted a huge rock near me. The killer was about to strike until I threw the rock to his head.

Declined, it needs major work.

[WolfHowlz]

Accepted, great paragraph, though it needs work on the introductory, I'll accept
how can I improve? (suggestions)...and yay! :D

[JediLucas5]

how can I improve? (suggestions)...and yay! :D

try lead ins. Like "as" or "though" it depends on the situation your in.

[JediLucas5]

my story for this weeks theme, to lazy and busy to write a totally new story here is one, bonus points to whomever finds the allusion.

As I stand at the valley of the dead, I see the mangled and twisted bodies; I gaze around the battle scene and wonder of what could of done this, a man? Impossible, no mere human could of killed all these men... I look down at the crippled bodies, there white cloaks painted red; and I mutter a single statement as I look on in horror: "Behold, Captor of Sin".



This was a descriptive writing with an allusion hidden into the context.

[live]

Definitions of syndicate on the Web:

* a loose affiliation of gangsters in charge of organized criminal activities



Good word, i use it alot. But meh, go ahead. If you reallly wanted a literal forum, go somewhere else

[JediLucas5]

Definitions of syndicate on the Web:

* a loose affiliation of gangsters in charge of organized criminal activities



Good word, i use it alot. But meh, go ahead. If you reallly wanted a literal forum, go somewhere else

Ya, I that thought in mind when I chose the word "Syndicate" I thought it sounded cooler so I was like "what the heck"

and lol at the literal part. Though a lot of people are pretty smart here.

[Eiliosdraye]

:( i want to do a free style application... I'm alot better at free style(this is more of an urban theme, i'm not very good with urban)

[JediLucas5]

:( i want to do a free style application... I'm alot better at free style(this is more of an urban theme, i'm not very good with urban)

this weeks theme is "urban". Everyone in their life encounters death.

[Eiliosdraye]

True, specially when you are plotting to control the world...
Meh...

Looking into your dead brothers eyes i saw reflected in the empty pool that is death, my own soul, and it moved me more then anything else in my life. I knew what i had to do. It has been 4 years, but i have practiced my sniping to the refinement that i can kill the person who did this to you, it is long overdue, but this is all i can give you. Along with this letter i give to you a package, bearing the head of the person who did this. Now i am writing to you from prison, please, i have made my sacrifice to you, make yours, bail me out of here, i don't have much time, the associates of the person i slayed are almost at me, i will be killed within the week. Save me, for i have saved your brother.

[troll]

Looking into my dead brother's face i go ewww!
Am i accepted?

[Eiliosdraye]

You should be, taht was moving and epic, you should publish it =D