Despair Below

[Xybob]

I've been putting this on Custom games for a while, and people are loving it. It's my first map, so I'm completely open to criticism (constructive, mind you) and compliments alike. Its name is "Despair Below" because of the despair the underground tunnel brings to both teams (the way to the artifact for Defence, and the trap for Offense). Please play and rate. Thanks!

I'll be putting this up from time to time on the custom game section, but if you want to play it yourself, the code is as follows:

Assault&Despair Below&1&44&22&129,129,129,129,129,129,40,40,40,41,40,40,40,40,40 ,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,4 0,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,129,129,129,129,129,129,47, 8,8,24,24,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,4 0,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,41, 40,40,40,24,24,8,8,129,129,47,8,8,8,8,8,9,8,40,40, 40,40,40,41,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40 ,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,129,129,47, 20,8,8,8,8,9,8,8,8,8,8,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,41, 40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,7,7,7,7,7,8,8,8,8,8, 20,129,129,47,20,8,37,2,8,9,9,9,9,9,9,9,9,7,7,7,40 ,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,8,9,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,7,8,8,1 ,3,8,20,129,129,47,20,19,19,19,8,8,9,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,8,8,40,40,40,8,7,7,9,9,7,7,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 19,19,19,20,129,129,47,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,7,8,8,7,8,9,9,9,9,8,8,8,7,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,20,129,129,47,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,9,9,9,9,8,8,8,8,2 0,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,1,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,23 ,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,21,8,8,3,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,20,20,8,8,8,8,3,8,8,21 ,8,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,21, 8,8,20,20,20,8,8,20,20,23,20,122,20,20,3,8,20,20,8 ,8,8,21,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,23,20,129,129,47,20,12 2,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,21,8,8,8,8,8,20,20,8,8,23,8, 122,8,8,20,20,8,8,8,8,8,21,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,23, 20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,7,7,8,8,8 ,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,23 ,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,9,9,9,8,8,8,8,7,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,9,9,9,9,9,8,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,2 3,20,129,129,47,20,122,15,8,8,8,9,9,8,7,7,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,13,13,16,13,13,3,8,8,8,8,9,9,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,8 ,1,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,15,7,7,8,9,8,9,9,9,8,8, 8,8,3,13,13,13,16,16,16,13,13,13,8,8,8,8,7,9,7,7,8 ,9,8,7,7,13,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,9,20,20, 8,8,9,8,8,8,13,13,13,13,16,16,13,16,16,13,13,13,13 ,8,8,36,8,8,8,8,8,9,7,8,13,23,20,129,129,47,20,122 ,8,8,8,20,20,0,20,8,9,8,8,13,13,13,13,16,16,13,13, 13,16,16,13,13,13,13,8,36,8,8,8,8,8,8,13,8,8,23,20 ,129,129,47,124,124,124,124,124,0,0,0,0,124,124,12 4,124,124,124,124,124,16,124,124,124,124,124,16,12 4,124,129,129,124,36,124,124,124,124,78,124,124,12 9,129,129,129,129,129,47,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 ,0,0,134,135,0,135,136,0,134,135,0,135,136,129,129 ,0,36,0,0,0,143,145,143,0,129,129,129,129,129,129, 47,0,0,0,2,0,0,129,0,129,0,129,129,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 ,0,0,0,0,0,0,129,129,0,36,0,0,0,0,3,0,130,129,129, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,0, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,12 9,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129

Please do NOT attempt to pass this off as your own. Thanks for reading, and I hope you have fun playing!

Here's an updated map-editor view of the map. Some things (the way into the passage, for one) cannot be seen.

I added some things, such as:

*A new, harder jump (including a trap) for the trapping reds. Nothing too hard though
*The blues lost a spawn that was too far away, and I moved a far away spawn that now lets them take full advantage of the trap
*Removed the ledge that reds could use to get a cheap shot at the artifact
*Added a little fall-in pit on the red side, used for escaping from battle right to an Ammo Box
*Decorated a little

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/xybob/PawnMap-1.png

NEW MAP!

I call it: Combat Squared.

Sucky name =(

Anyways, it's a small map, but because of the two seperated sections, it can easily hold 10 people.

Pic:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/xybob/PawnMapTwo.png

Code is as follows: (Oh, and again; Please don't take this)

Team Deathmatch&Combat Squared&1&16&22&21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,23 ,0,0,0,23,0,18,0,0,18,0,122,0,0,0,122,23,0,1,0,23, 0,18,0,0,18,0,122,0,2,0,122,23,20,20,18,23,20,20,2 0,20,20,20,122,18,20,20,122,23,0,0,0,23,0,15,0,0,1 5,0,122,0,0,0,122,23,0,0,0,23,18,15,0,0,15,18,122, 0,0,0,122,23,1,0,0,23,18,0,0,0,0,18,122,0,0,2,122, 23,20,20,15,23,20,20,20,20,20,20,122,15,20,20,122, 23,0,0,0,23,0,15,0,0,15,0,122,0,0,0,122,23,0,0,1,2 3,0,0,0,0,0,0,122,2,0,0,122,19,20,20,20,20,20,20,2 0,20,20,20,20,20,20,20,19,19,20,20,20,20,20,20,20, 20,20,20,20,20,20,20,19,122,0,0,0,122,0,18,0,0,18, 0,23,0,0,0,23,122,2,0,0,122,0,18,0,0,18,0,23,0,0,1 ,23,122,20,20,15,122,20,20,20,20,20,20,23,15,20,20 ,23,122,0,0,0,122,0,15,0,0,15,0,23,0,0,0,23,122,0, 0,0,122,18,15,0,0,15,18,23,0,0,0,23,122,0,2,0,122, 18,0,0,0,0,18,23,0,1,0,23,122,20,20,18,122,20,20,2 0,20,20,20,23,18,20,20,23,122,0,0,0,122,0,15,0,0,1 5,0,23,0,0,0,23,122,0,0,2,122,0,0,0,0,0,0,23,1,0,0 ,23,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,21,2 1

[JustShootMe]

pretty cool i liked it

[Xybob]

pretty cool i liked it

Thanks! Any ways I can improve it?

[SketchZ]

The Artifact is way way too open to attacks :\

Good layout, bad tile usage (looks funky..)

well, looks kinda fun, 3/5

[Xybob]

The Artifact is way way too open to attacks :\

Good layout, bad tile usage (looks funky..)

well, looks kinda fun, 3/5

Any ways in particular my tile usage was bad? :P

And yeah, I might add one more block and move that blue spawn up to shield it :D

[Aka]

I've been putting this on Custom games for a while, and people are loving it. It's my first map, so I'm completely open to criticism (constructive, mind you) and compliments alike. Its name is "Despair Below" because of the despair the underground tunnel brings to both teams (the way to the artifact for Defence, and the trap for Offense). Please play and rate. Thanks!

I'll be putting this up from time to time on the custom game section, but if you want to play it yourself, the code is as follows:

Assault&Despair Below&1&44&22&129,129,129,129,129,129,40,40,40,41,40,40,40,40,40 ,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,4 0,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,129,129,129,129,129,129,47, 8,8,24,24,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,4 0,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,41, 40,40,40,24,24,8,8,129,129,47,8,8,8,8,8,9,8,40,40, 40,40,40,41,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40 ,40,40,40,40,42,40,40,40,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,129,129,47, 20,8,8,8,8,9,8,8,8,8,8,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,41, 40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,7,7,7,7,7,8,8,8,8,8, 20,129,129,47,20,8,37,2,8,9,9,9,9,9,9,9,9,7,7,7,40 ,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,40,8,9,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,7,8,8,1 ,3,8,20,129,129,47,20,19,19,19,8,8,9,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,8,8,40,40,40,8,7,7,9,9,7,7,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 19,19,19,20,129,129,47,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,7,8,8,7,8,9,9,9,9,8,8,8,7,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,20,129,129,47,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,9,9,9,9,8,8,8,8,2 0,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8, 8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,1,20,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,23 ,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,21,8,8,3,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8 ,8,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,20,20,8,8,8,8,3,8,8,21 ,8,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,21, 8,8,20,20,20,8,8,20,20,23,20,122,20,20,3,8,20,20,8 ,8,8,21,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,23,20,129,129,47,20,12 2,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,21,8,8,8,8,8,20,20,8,8,23,8, 122,8,8,20,20,8,8,8,8,8,21,21,21,21,8,21,21,21,23, 20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,7,7,8,8,8 ,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,8,23 ,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,9,9,9,8,8,8,8,7,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,23,8,122,8,8,9,9,9,9,9,8,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,8,8,2 3,20,129,129,47,20,122,15,8,8,8,9,9,8,7,7,8,8,8,8, 8,8,8,13,13,16,13,13,3,8,8,8,8,9,9,9,8,7,8,8,8,8,8 ,1,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,15,7,7,8,9,8,9,9,9,8,8, 8,8,3,13,13,13,16,16,16,13,13,13,8,8,8,8,7,9,7,7,8 ,9,8,7,7,13,23,20,129,129,47,20,122,8,8,8,9,20,20, 8,8,9,8,8,8,13,13,13,13,16,16,13,16,16,13,13,13,13 ,8,8,36,8,8,8,8,8,9,7,8,13,23,20,129,129,47,20,122 ,8,8,8,20,20,0,20,8,9,8,8,13,13,13,13,16,16,13,13, 13,16,16,13,13,13,13,8,36,8,8,8,8,8,8,13,8,8,23,20 ,129,129,47,124,124,124,124,124,0,0,0,0,124,124,12 4,124,124,124,124,124,16,124,124,124,124,124,16,12 4,124,129,129,124,36,124,124,124,124,78,124,124,12 9,129,129,129,129,129,47,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 ,0,0,134,135,0,135,136,0,134,135,0,135,136,129,129 ,0,36,0,0,0,143,145,143,0,129,129,129,129,129,129, 47,0,0,0,2,0,0,129,0,129,0,129,129,0,0,0,0,0,0,0,0 ,0,0,0,0,0,0,129,129,0,36,0,0,0,0,3,0,130,129,129, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,0, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,12 9,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129, 129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129,129

Please do NOT attempt to pass this off as your own. Thanks for reading, and I hope you have fun playing!

Here's an updated map-editor view of the map. Some things (the way into the passage, for one) cannot be seen.

I added some things, such as:

*A new, harder jump (including a trap) for the trapping reds. Nothing too hard though
*The blues lost a spawn that was too far away, and I moved a far away spawn that now lets them take full advantage of the trap
*Removed the ledge that reds could use to get a cheap shot at the artifact
*Added a little fall-in pit on the red side, used for escaping from battle right to an Ammo Box
*Decorated a little

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v233/xybob/PawnMap-1.png

its messy 2/5 I -1 for the pit

[Xybob]

its messy 2/5 I -1 for the pit

-1 for the pit?

How is that bad?

Oh, and the look of messiness resulted when I had to remove or add one thing or another.

[Puffer]

-1 for the pit?

How is that bad?

Oh, and the look of messiness resulted when I had to remove or add one thing or another.

yea true....:/

[Xybob]

yea true....:/

True what? 0_o

Oh, and I added a new map here =P