2-TDM-First map

[EvilOne]

http://i697.photobucket.com/albums/vv331/EvilTime/Map-1.png
My first map.
Tell me what you think about it and how to improve it :D
I posted the code so you can see it

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Edit:
Version 1.1
http://i697.photobucket.com/albums/vv331/EvilTime/Map-11-1.png
Also added Koth Version
http://i697.photobucket.com/albums/vv331/EvilTime/Map-12T-Koth.png
If I can improve those versions tell me ok

[SkYScorn]

Spray rape...

Add in some concrete walls/crates.


2/5

[EvilOne]

Spray rape...

Add in some concrete walls/crates.


2/5

About that-I put the walls in start high enough so pepole can spray in thier

[Mario99880]

Lol you totally beat my first map; mine sucks compared to yours.
For a first map its good. My suggestion would to add some more crates and spray barriers.

[UniteD]

Those gray castle wall thingies are useless if you can shoot through them.
You need spray barriers top and bttom or those areas are useless, technically, there is nothing to block a bullet before it goes off the map.
I hate when that happens.
And I beat both of you on my first map.

[FrozenBreath]

Too much spray
Add some walls, and if you conquer the hill in the middle, your pretty
comfortable being able to kill everyone who gets anywhere near you

[TheCakeIsALie]

Looks more like a FFa Koth, or 2-team Koth.

[Ilikeshooting]

Your tileflow isn't bad for a first, but having heights like that with no concrete to block bullets means epic spray and high shooting. Simply too much domination with the heights, I would say you should try to work in concrete walls. It would also be good to include some slight obstacles and such to the unused areas, even if it is just a crate, it helps both the gameplay and the appearance of the map.

[Devan]

start with little maps then you'll be doing some big ones but yea map has spray and do what Ils said, to make map look more beautiful :p

[lexh7]

its a empty map, but its good for a first. Ill give it a 6/10
And on the side towers; you cant nade ppl that are on the top of the towers, fix that

[xHotRodMan]

Too empty.
You'll be raped as soon as you spawn by spray.
Add some crates and some spray barriers.
6/10 for first map

[EvilOne]

I added new version of the map+Koth Mode
Hope those are better

[FrozenBreath]

They are better, but maybe add another wall on the +1 platform
And add some decoration (Crates and stuff)

[LambOfGod4218]

lol i guess its pretty good :D

[Brandon868]

It's a good map but it's also a spray map. Add some crates or concrete walls to stop the spraying.