song writing

[slayer1578]

i made a song!
http://dagodsofwar.webs.com/apps/forums/topics/show/1510963-i-need-help-please?page=last
its the last won on the page i updated it and its not some some hanna montana crap so if u like that stuff dont critisize it ok im trying to make a anger song Korn style sooooo ya i dont post lyrics on this sight cause it swears! so if u dont want to see bad words dont click there haha post if u like dislike or what should be fixed

[slayer1578]

bump Gin dont critises if u like pop or rap its metal goddangit!

[Quantooce]

It's terrible. Stop writing songs.

Oh, and way to post this site for people to troll on it.

[Cowdude]

What the hell does (chures) mean??!?!?

[slayer1578]

o.... wow u fail any ways i spelled it rong and if u really dont now what it means u shouldnt be rating the song and alot of people did like it quantice so please stat y u dont?

[TheUnSpoken]

Stick to pawn. Fail bup is fail. I smell some -rep FER U
O yeah. Nice double post too.

[slayer1578]

It's terrible. Stop writing songs.

Oh, and way to post this site for people to troll on it.
srry for the double post .... btw its my first so.. no

[Quantooce]

When you***8217;re a kid u here stories of how great life is....

stories that make u belive....

make u please...

wake up!

wake the **** up!

LLLLLEEEEEEETSSSSS GOOOOOO!




when i dream nightmares apear

when i scream life disapers

people laugh those ******* queers!





(chures)

time goes fast life goes slow

when u lie u dont always no.

anger feeds friends let u go

blood is lost. just GO!





maby its from false rumers?

maby its from lieing to myself?



but lieing is beliving right?

NO!

Whats with all these fucked up feelings again!





life tragidies fucked with stradigies

note tied up in my head?

friends tried again?

no they failed again.







(chures)

time goes fast life goes slow

when u lie u dont always no.

anger feeds friends let u go

blood is lost. just GO!



my bloody blades and 2 cut up wrists

my point? lifes a *****

people saying your nothing ( u are )


dont worry youl be something (BULLSHIT!)




brived with drugs robed of all love

(my hope is lost wares my blades?)

hopes of sex but got no xes {if u dint get this part exs as in ex gfs LOL}

y does life treat me this way?

(WARES MY ******* BLADES!)





(chures)

time goes fast life goes slow

when u lie u dont always no.

anger feeds friends let u go

blood is lost. just GO!




haha each time closer and closer (bleed!)


each slice harder and farther! (BLEED!)






o **** arm drenched in blood.

looks like im lieing again. {means lieng about ware the cute are from}





PAIN! (SHOUT!) AGONY!(SHOUT)CONVULSION!(******* SCREAM!)

THROB!(SHOUT!)WOUNDED!(SHOUT!)LACERATION!(******* SCREAM)

{remmeber parinthesis are whispers}




time goes fast life goes slow

when u lie u dont always no.

anger feeds friends let u go

blood is lost. Just go!










( (chures) (this time all out anger))



time goes fast life goes slow

when u lie u dont always no.

anger feeds friends let u go

blood is lost. JUST ******* GOOOO!

Do I really need to tell you why it's bad?

[slayer1578]

ok like 50 people said it was a great song im not mad at u but what kind of music u listin 2?


o btw wen u did that quantice u forgot to bleep out some of the swear words.... hope u dont get baned theres a reson i posted it on that sight not here lols

[slayer1578]

Are you ready?

This place inside my mind, a place I like to hide
You don't know the chances, what if I should die?
(A place inside my brain, another)
Kind of pain
You don't know the chances, I'm so blind
Blind, blind

Another place I find, to escape the pain inside
You don't know the chances, what if I should die?
(A place inside my brain, another)
Another kind of pain
You don't know the chances, I'm so blind
Blind, blind

Deeper and deeper and deeper as I journey to
Live a life that seems to be
A lost reality
That can never find a way to reach my inner
Self esteem is low, how deep can I go, in the ground that I lay?
If I don't find a way to, see through the gray that clouds my mind
This time I look to see what's between the lines

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind

ok u like these? there not mine there a famouse i mean hugly susseful metal band this is won of there most famouse songs do u like these lyrics probaly not yet.. there complete pwnege




here another same artist

HIV!

Here I am different in this normal world ________
Why did you tease me? Made me feel absurd
******* stereotypes feeding their heads
I am ugly. Please just go away

HIV!
I can see it's hard to find
This blessing in disguise
HIV!
Why do you treat me this way?
Made the hate stay (Made the hurt stay)

I sound like I can never seem to escape
all the laughing, all the pain
If you were me, what would you do?
Nothing, probaly. You'd just throw me away (X3)

Faget!

I'm just a pretty boy, whatever you call it
You wouldn't know a real man if you saw it
It keeps going on day after day, son
you fake, if we don't want none
I'm sick and tired of people treating me this way everyday
Who gives a f***?!
Right now I got something to say to all the people that think
I'm strange and I should be out here locked up in a cage
You don't know what the hell is up now anyway
You got this pretty-boy feeling
like I'm enslaved to a world that never
appreciated ****
YOU CAN SUCK MY **** AND F***ING LIKE IT!!!

He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anysay
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going to say
he had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anysay
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going away
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going to say
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway

I'm just a pretty boy, I'm not supposed to f**k a girl
I'm just a pretty boy, living in this f***ed up world (x2)

All my life, who am I?

I'm just a faget!
Faget!
I'm a faget!
Faget!
I'm not a faget
What am I?
Faget!
You mother f***ing queers!




these are 2 famouse song beast lyrics u probally hate them.. i could do more not so famouse songs of this artist there realy is no reson im not saying the name of this band u now maby u could fugure it out

[Quantooce]

ok like 50 people said it was a great song im not mad at u but what kind of music u listin 2?


o btw wen u did that quantice u forgot to bleep out some of the swear words.... hope u dont get baned theres a reson i posted it on that sight not here lols

Yeah, 50 twelve year old kids that listen to the same music?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oknLw3hgm7E&feature=related

Try listening to music that doesn't actually suck.

[slayer1578]

ok bi**H im 14 and its korn mofo its acculy adult music 12 year old dont listin go toake your sh*it for classicle music(wich im not saying its bad cause im not racist against yps of music like u) any ways go take it and shove it up your @$$ korn yes its korn seccesfull band that wrote all there mucic about jonathen davis(Lead singer) about his sh*t for childhood his dad abuused and raped him get a life dont diss purr hate music all his music he can relate unlike your sorry a$$

[slayer1578]

lol i just got baned for sweareing infront of 3 mods and a admin XD lols

[Quantooce]

ok bi**H im 14 and its korn mofo its acculy adult music 12 year old dont listin go toake your sh*it for classicle music(wich im not saying its bad cause im not racist against yps of music like u) any ways go take it and shove it up your @$$ korn yes its korn seccesfull band that wrote all there mucic about jonathen davis(Lead singer) about his sh*t for childhood his dad abuused and raped him get a life dont diss purr hate music all his music he can relate unlike your sorry a$$

I'm sorry, I really can't make a serious response since I'm laughing so hard.

[LaginatorJR]

ok bi**H im 14 and its korn mofo its acculy adult music 12 year old dont listin go toake your sh*it for classicle music(wich im not saying its bad cause im not racist against yps of music like u) any ways go take it and shove it up your @$$ korn yes its korn seccesfull band that wrote all there mucic about jonathen davis(Lead singer) about his sh*t for childhood his dad abuused and raped him get a life dont diss purr hate music all his music he can relate unlike your sorry a$$

Sorry to tell you but read this please. (Number 1 to be exact) http://www.pawngame.com/forum/announcement.php?f=14

[iWin]

Lmfao!!
This song is is..
umm..
it iss..

[AlbertMond]

Ya'll realize the forum he posted that on was called "Pawn Trolls" or something, right?

[Quantooce]

Ya'll realize the forum he posted that on was called "Pawn Trolls" or something, right?

I believe it was his clan site.

[AlbertMond]

I believe it was his clan site.

PT TROLL FUROMS
Last gow utf or all other gow related clans have fallen... but we can use this sight still!
please tell evrybody about this sight now as much as u like

Where's the camera-
Oh myyy!

[Quantooce]

Where's the camera-
Oh myyy!

But they aren't trolls, so ...

[slayer1578]

lmao u people are retards its gows old sight so i said screw it and made it open to evrybody

[Weewoo]

Ok... so I like Korn... but I think you just disgraced them.
Those are horrible lyrics. Offensive too.

[AlbertMond]

But they aren't trolls, so ...

How do you know?

[UniteD]

Is this like a fast paces rap?
Or is it like...contemporary.
It sucks either way.

[adrw]

Are you ready?

This place inside my mind, a place I like to hide
You don't know the chances, what if I should die?
(A place inside my brain, another)
Kind of pain
You don't know the chances, I'm so blind
Blind, blind

Another place I find, to escape the pain inside
You don't know the chances, what if I should die?
(A place inside my brain, another)
Another kind of pain
You don't know the chances, I'm so blind
Blind, blind

Deeper and deeper and deeper as I journey to
Live a life that seems to be
A lost reality
That can never find a way to reach my inner
Self esteem is low, how deep can I go, in the ground that I lay?
If I don't find a way to, see through the gray that clouds my mind
This time I look to see what's between the lines

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind

ok u like these? there not mine there a famouse i mean hugly susseful metal band this is won of there most famouse songs do u like these lyrics probaly not yet.. there complete pwnege




here another same artist

HIV!

Here I am different in this normal world ________
Why did you tease me? Made me feel absurd
******* stereotypes feeding their heads
I am ugly. Please just go away

HIV!
I can see it's hard to find
This blessing in disguise
HIV!
Why do you treat me this way?
Made the hate stay (Made the hurt stay)

I sound like I can never seem to escape
all the laughing, all the pain
If you were me, what would you do?
Nothing, probaly. You'd just throw me away (X3)

Faget!

I'm just a pretty boy, whatever you call it
You wouldn't know a real man if you saw it
It keeps going on day after day, son
you fake, if we don't want none
I'm sick and tired of people treating me this way everyday
Who gives a f***?!
Right now I got something to say to all the people that think
I'm strange and I should be out here locked up in a cage
You don't know what the hell is up now anyway
You got this pretty-boy feeling
like I'm enslaved to a world that never
appreciated ****
YOU CAN SUCK MY **** AND F***ING LIKE IT!!!

He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anysay
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going to say
he had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anysay
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going away
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, not going to say
He had my gun but he had a body mighty, anyway

I'm just a pretty boy, I'm not supposed to f**k a girl
I'm just a pretty boy, living in this f***ed up world (x2)

All my life, who am I?

I'm just a faget!
Faget!
I'm a faget!
Faget!
I'm not a faget
What am I?
Faget!
You mother f***ing queers!




these are 2 famouse song beast lyrics u probally hate them.. i could do more not so famouse songs of this artist there realy is no reson im not saying the name of this band u now maby u could fugure it out

http://www.corbisimages.com/images/42-15717909.jpg?size=67&uid=C9DBBA76-FBFD-41DF-9AC1-1061DF8BFAA2

[xXSlayerXx]

Chures?
..ok then
Song's kinda messed up,no offence..

[Damixnarai]

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind
(Aaa)
I can't see, I can't see, I'm goin' blind

I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind
I'm blind

I'm just a faget!
Faget!
I'm a faget!
Faget!
I'm not a faget
What am I?
Faget!
You mother f***ing queers!

You say you're going blind, well so am I. It's a horrible song, and if I were to listen to it, then...

I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf


I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
(Aaa)
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
(Aaa)

You see, I just wrote a song right there.

BTW: Yeah, you are a faget.

[slayer1578]

ok so u guys dont like my song i could care less but the ******* who made fun of korn that songs solds millions of albums dont say that or i will kil u have a nice day :)

[slayer1578]

You say you're going blind, well so am I. It's a horrible song, and if I were to listen to it, then...

I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf


I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
(Aaa)
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
I can't hear, I can't hear, I'm goin' deaf
(Aaa)

You see, I just wrote a song right there.

BTW: Yeah, you are a faget.
o ima get band for this but i dont give a **** **** u *******

[Brep]

Get some beepin grammer lessons your doing my nut in.

ONTOPIC: I do not like this song :D

[slayer1578]

Get some beepin grammer lessons your doing my nut in.

ONTOPIC: I do not like this song :D
haha i like u at lerast u were nice about not likeing it :) lol well kinda not about the grammer lessons XD lol

[troll]

Oh god this thread made me lol till it hurt.

[FlippysKnife]

Are you finally coming out of the closet?

[dasbinich]

i dont understand it

[Longgone]

Oh the irony.

[slayer1578]

fine fine u menies ill throw this won away and start a new won :)

[maggerz]

Sounds like a slipknot song.