Industrial Towers

[Brandon0104]

I havent posted a map on the forums in a long time so I decided to make a map.
I know that it's not the best.

Name - Industrial Towers
Background - 3

V1
http://i31.tinypic.com/de1etw.png
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V2

http://i26.tinypic.com/28wi1w.png

Fixed Ladderless
Fixed Shadow
Moved refill to bottom
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[daridmetch1]

I didn't see a screenie so yeah...
http://i646.photobucket.com/albums/uu181/daridmetch1/Map6.jpg

Anyways, it's a nice map and looks great but there's a few problems. The map's sort of tight and there isn't much room to fight in. Also, the top spawns look like they're too close to a refill and that ruins the gameplay.
You even have a refill on a screen switch... =/
Overall, I have to say it's a decent 2.5~3/5 atm... Nice map anyways

Btw, plus rep me for posting epic screenie! Lol jk (Do it :P)

[MissLadie]

Gameplay is a little repetitive but I like it.

[PiNGPaWN]

I like the looks!
Do a little something to the bottom middle to make it less tight.

The little crane thingies that you put at the top left and right look
like you just put them there to take up space lol, I think it would look
better without it but it's up too you :)

[Cowdude]

http://i26.tinypic.com/2zy8qi8.png
I didn't see a good screenie so yeah.
Also you have a ladderless and ogm/shadow jump right next to each other.

[AGurl]

Multiple ogm/shadow jumps actually.

Gameplay seems good, just move the refils off the edge of the screen

[Brandon0104]

Fixed a couple things.

Refill moved to bottom
Ladderless Fixed
Ogm Fixed (didn't think other one was neccasary)
http://i26.tinypic.com/28wi1w.png

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[AGurl]

Maybe you could incorporate getting on top of the towers?

Just a suggestion.

[Villyer]

Spawn camping .=/

[Brandon0104]

Spawn camping .=/
I don't see how that can be camped.

[Villyer]

I don't see how that can be camped.


The proximity of the refills to the spawns allows for easy refilling, and the way you have the map set up whenever your trying to move closer to the middle, you have to drop to the ground floor.
Since the attackers can easily get full health and direct the flow of the spawners, its easy to camp them.

[Brandon0104]

Actually vill when I tested the map there wasn't really camping at all. Not even in the middle.
You need to test it with me it is really fun.