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Dpballer
07-23-2009, 12:58 PM
.:Cranes:.

Size: 3x3

Background 8

Theme: Crane

Type: Assault

Key: Blue is F boxes, Green is Refills

http://i29.tinypic.com/15qyzxs.png

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Be sure to rate 4 or 5 stars! :D

Chickletman
07-23-2009, 01:01 PM
I could see this as being the next June assault map. Nice game play, creative, sexy. ;D Would be a great addition to the server in my opinion, we just need to make it well known to the public O:

Even though my rate doesn't count, I guess I could give this one a 4/5
★★★★★

Dpballer
07-23-2009, 01:22 PM
Yea, this is probably the best map I've made and the only Crane map that you will see for a while that in my opinion and a lot more others is server worthy.

Villyer
07-23-2009, 01:33 PM
This map is pretty nice.
Gameplay overall is pretty good.
I like the theme, origional and it comes together nicely.

But theres a few things that prevent my from saying its server worthy.


http://i32.tinypic.com/3321jxg.jpg


You can get trapped. =/
Make that F so theres no screen jump.
If you make it impossible to go that way, it would improve the path a bit. Forces you to go over, which before I dont think people would have.
I think this way should be blocked off. If red climbs up the ladder, they dont really know which way to go. If they go left its a dead end, and if they go right, they dont know that refill is over there.
Since you cant reach that refill if you cahnge the red, make one here.
That would annoy me to climb after a while.
I think you should make a way for blue to use this, so then can get to different parts of the map faster. (like have a drop from above so they dont have to climb up those stairs to the central ladder every time they spawn in the bottom right.



3/5

Dpballer
07-23-2009, 01:36 PM
Are you sure you have the right map? There isn't a trap. You must've gotten confused.

A screen jump there shouldn't make a difference.

I planned on making a few minor adjustments. Just wanted a few opinions before I did anything. I can't change it right now because of being in submissions.

Blocking off the left side has to do with knowing the map. They'll find out when they play it.

Villyer
07-23-2009, 01:38 PM
Are you sure you have the right map? There isn't a trap. You must've gotten confused.


xD

(not suposed to change your map)

NuMbA
07-23-2009, 01:49 PM
I would say take out the random boxes, shorten some of the ladders, and maybe use the cran tiles in a way that makes the map ook better.

Other tahn the the gameplay looks great.

Btw there is a shortcut to the arti.

rambo33
07-23-2009, 02:11 PM
I love this map...Why do you keep posting it though?

I give 4.5/5

MrICE
11-07-2009, 06:15 PM
5/5 nice map