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CraziiJustice
06-28-2009, 07:41 PM
Map Name: Fort Wars
Type: team Death Match
I believe my map is worthy of the server for Pawngame. I've tested this map many times with other players, most not experienced map makers, but regular players in the community. Each time we've had a fun time on my map, and I think adding it to the server would be a wise choice.
http://i40.tinypic.com/2iurkth.png
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SmoothCopyCat
06-28-2009, 08:00 PM
Tdm's should be symitrical for one. (the same on both side's)
This map has a lot of flat spots within it.
Try putting mor obstical's in gameplay areas.
There is a lota wasted space in area's outside fort's.
Floating ladders.
Bad refill placement.
Someplace's are tight.
Smoothy's rating: 2/5
CraziiJustice
06-28-2009, 09:34 PM
Well I can't change your rating, but I think I can school you in what you listed.
TDs should be symmetrical? If you look at Arena(the most popular map in Pawn) it isn't nearly as symmetrical as mine.
wasted space, but it's also tight? Hmm. I believe I know which spots you're reffering too(the four 2 unit sized spaces in the top half of my map) I don't see how that ruins anything at all. It's a change in gameplay, and I've seen other maps on the submission list WAY more tight, if not just as tight. Bad refill placement? If you notice, the refills are in areas that balance out gameplay and movement throughout the map. They make you use the ENTIRE map, rather than sitting at the bottom. Floating ladders? I don't see people complaining about it in Quick Draw, and it's not like I did it out of stupidity, I did it to add to the maps looks. Besides, if they're too lazy to jump up let them jump down, hence the roof holes. As for flat spots, I never went past 4 maximum flat units which I've noticed many fun maps don't.
^^That's not a hit at you or anything, just how I feel about the map and for anyone else rating.
And Feat, instead of simply posting, may you give some insight for my future maps I make?
And to other raters, I ask you to play the map rather than just glance and post.
MunkeY
06-28-2009, 09:46 PM
Its a good map.
SneaK
06-28-2009, 10:01 PM
Omg, that reminds me of Castle Wars!
Get more creative.
CraziiJustice
06-28-2009, 10:04 PM
What's clan wars? lmao
SneaK
06-28-2009, 10:06 PM
What's clan wars? lmao
What do you mean?
RaptorZ
06-28-2009, 10:07 PM
Change What i Said.
Villyer
06-28-2009, 10:12 PM
Tdm's should be symitrical for one. (the same on both side's)
This map has a lot of flat spots within it.
Try putting mor obstical's in gameplay areas.
There is a lota wasted space in area's outside fort's.
Floating ladders.
Bad refill placement.
Someplace's are tight.
Smoothy's rating: 2/5
That. ^
And bad canopy use.
2/5
PiNGPaWN
06-28-2009, 10:31 PM
That. ^
And bad canopy use.
2/5
Rofl. 2/5??
It's not flat at all...
Bad tile flow.
Bad canopy use.
Non symetrical TDM is fail.
Too much wasted space, in center of the map.
Omg, that reminds me of Castle Wars!
Get more creative.
It doesn't remind me anything of Castle Wars.
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Overall:
1/5
- This map is not server worthy, sorry.
Snoopy
06-28-2009, 11:46 PM
Well I can't change your rating, but I think I can school you in what you listed.
TDs should be symmetrical? If you look at Arena(the most popular map in Pawn) it isn't nearly as symmetrical as mine.
wasted space, but it's also tight? Hmm. I believe I know which spots you're reffering too(the four 2 unit sized spaces in the top half of my map) I don't see how that ruins anything at all. It's a change in gameplay, and I've seen other maps on the submission list WAY more tight, if not just as tight. Bad refill placement? If you notice, the refills are in areas that balance out gameplay and movement throughout the map. They make you use the ENTIRE map, rather than sitting at the bottom. Floating ladders? I don't see people complaining about it in Quick Draw, and it's not like I did it out of stupidity, I did it to add to the maps looks. Besides, if they're too lazy to jump up let them jump down, hence the roof holes. As for flat spots, I never went past 4 maximum flat units which I've noticed many fun maps don't.
^^That's not a hit at you or anything, just how I feel about the map and for anyone else rating.
And Feat, instead of simply posting, may you give some insight for my future maps I make?
And to other raters, I ask you to play the map rather than just glance and post.
Castle wars is tied >.<, and your map isn't just server material.
It's not about symetricallity.
Its looks gameplay and fun. when you get 4/5 from 8 people call me.
SeasonalTNT
06-29-2009, 12:57 AM
Castle wars is tied >.<, and your map isn't just server material.
It's not about symetricallity.
Its looks gameplay and fun. when you get 4/5 from 8 people call me.
Lol, making up new words here? It's symmetry; you're making it more complicated than it needs to be =P
But this map is FAR from server worthy. Not as far as other maps, but still far.
CraziiJustice
06-29-2009, 12:58 AM
Rofl. 2/5??
It's not flat at all...
Bad tile flow.
Bad canopy use.
Non symetrical TDM is fail.
Too much wasted space, in center of the map.
It doesn't remind me anything of Castle Wars.
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Overall:
1/5
- This map is not server worthy, sorry.
Okay to the other stuff, but how does adding one block make it 'Fail'?
and what exactly is good canopy if I'm using mine so badly.
And Feat, why should I call you?
SeasonalTNT
06-29-2009, 01:11 AM
Take any of my Canopy maps or Smooth's Canopy maps, for example. THOSE are good Canopy usage. Well, in the high moderate range, but still.
CraziiJustice
06-29-2009, 01:22 AM
But all those have so many random branches ! It looks more appealing sleek and smooth to me, but you're the raters
SeasonalTNT
06-29-2009, 01:27 AM
It seems that the Canopy here is mainly for decoration.
It should never be just for decoration.
The next map you make, try to make it pure Canopy. Perhaps you'll be enlightened.
CraziiJustice
06-29-2009, 01:29 AM
Okay thanks dude
I thought this one was server worthy D:
Chickletman
07-20-2009, 08:21 PM
It seems that the Canopy here is mainly for decoration.
It should never be just for decoration.
The next map you make, try to make it pure Canopy. Perhaps you'll be enlightened.
Wtf are you talking about? That's like saying if you add a waterfall in your jungle map, you need to use those yellow water tiles too.
Gtfo with that crap. The tiles in here were used for decoration, yes. Would you rather have a different tile used? The canopy looks great here.
I like teh mapcake
AGurl
08-07-2009, 01:01 PM
personally i think that the bases look like crap... i mean.. who builds a base out of wooden blocks.. and your points about how arena is unsymmetrical and quick draw has floating ladders... THOSE WERE MAPS MADE LIKE 3 YEARS AGO...
back then... those things were okay... now MMT people go bananas over floating ladders, touching refils, symmetricalality..all that stuff... dont argue with them, listen... why do you think they are pawns map making team? they must know something about the mysterious map editor....
2.5/5
it has potential..
Fatty
08-07-2009, 01:05 PM
i think this looks a little small for a tdm :/
CraziiJustice
08-07-2009, 01:17 PM
personally i think that the bases look like crap... i mean.. who builds a base out of wooden blocks.. and your points about how arena is unsymmetrical and quick draw has floating ladders... THOSE WERE MAPS MADE LIKE 3 YEARS AGO...
back then... those things were okay... now MMT people go bananas over floating ladders, touching refils, symmetricalality..all that stuff... dont argue with them, listen... why do you think they are pawns map making team? they must know something about the mysterious map editor....
2.5/5
it has potential..
If they sucks so much and were maps from forever ago, then how come they are played much more than any of the recently servered maps?
Just because a map isnt up to one elitest group standards doesnt mean it's not a fun map to play on. the floating ladders don't kill you, its not like if you miss you drop way down, it's ONE SPACE!
Wooden blocks? Lots of maps have urban crates, and it looks better than just a castle wars remake.
Maybe if you actually played the map with a bunch of people you would enjoy it
Chickletman
08-07-2009, 07:15 PM
Cow and I have super edited teh map LOLOL
we are teh server kings
FORT WARS FOR SOMTHING!!
http://i25.tinypic.com/2cx6bgg.png
Seriously though, Cowdude and I have edited the map to make pretty solid game play and nice looks. It is up to the America to decide! Will Fort Wars be voted in the bottom two!? Text your vote to 8493Fort, that's 8493Fort.
Cowdude
08-07-2009, 09:00 PM
Cow and I have super edited teh map LOLOL
we are teh server kings
FORT WARS FOR SOMTHING!!
http://i25.tinypic.com/2cx6bgg.png
Seriously though, Cowdude and I have edited the map to make pretty solid game play and nice looks. It is up to the America to decide! Will Fort Wars be voted in the bottom two!? Text your vote to 8493Fort, that's 8493Fort.
Oh and crazii.
This will cost you 1 million dollars.
A job like this cannot go unpaid.
Cough it up >:)
I still like the name Wart Fors
*look at the post below*
Chickletman has it.
Ask him.
Yup.
NuMbA
08-07-2009, 09:01 PM
cowdude cna i have the code to your version?
Chickletman
08-08-2009, 08:20 AM
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Wart Fors!
CraziiJustice
08-08-2009, 08:44 AM
Thanks for everyones suggestions
using cows version i added a bit of a platform for protecton
http://i27.tinypic.com/11r3ndf.png
should i repost for server
Cowdude
08-08-2009, 08:53 AM
Thanks for everyones suggestions
using cows version i added a bit of a platform for protecton
http://i27.tinypic.com/11r3ndf.png
should i repost for server
Chickletman and Cowdude's version >:l
CraziiJustice
08-08-2009, 09:00 AM
okay chick and cow and crazii and numba and vill and the entire map making team should i repost for votes?
skateordie
08-08-2009, 09:12 AM
I give it a 3/5 cause if u are a noob and u need points that is just like paddin CAMPING! get a good gun and kill the N00bs!:)
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