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warnoob
05-27-2009, 02:37 PM
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http://i40.tinypic.com/1zx9o2.jpg

this is my lastest map, an assult 3x3 map which contains many places to hide, snipe and is open for most tactics. in order for blue to win, they dont only need strong guns, but also teamwork, protecting every entrance using snipe spots, hiding and fast reflexes.

(note that boxes with arrows are transpert)

UreOnMyHitList
05-27-2009, 05:31 PM
Pics are good. I saved you though.

http://i40.tinypic.com/1zx9o2.jpg

Double ladders are bad.

Other then that, it's not bad for a first map. Add some industrial, urban, space tiles to spice it up a bit along with some windows.

SmoothCopyCat
05-27-2009, 08:07 PM
-double ladders
-alota refills
-crouches i think..
-symitrical assault are kinda boring and dumb..
-too many blue spawns
-too many red spawns.
-only really need 1 arti.
-very plain.


+try and make smaller maps first and get good at them
+add some art or window to your map..
+the most refills needed in a map is 4.
+the most spawns you want is 3 for each team..


*you have alota potential keep working on it.

coolestkings
05-27-2009, 08:18 PM
there is some extra space on the two bottom corners than you could use

NuMbA
05-27-2009, 08:20 PM
i think you should try using different tile-sets

Wannabe
05-27-2009, 08:37 PM
Ladders should never touch >.<...
Double Ladders aren't good >.<
Some crouches ..
Too Many spawn points...
Try to Mix the tiles a bit
Some what Plain
But Overall its pretty good for your first map..

1.5/5

jfella91
05-27-2009, 09:13 PM
Bland, tight spots, camp spots, open space, double ladders, too many spawns, no clear path to arti. Try to fix these things and I guarantee you it will look better. Maybe try looking at maps by people who are from the map-making team before making your next map, or looking at the guide, or both O_o.

warnoob
05-28-2009, 05:09 AM
il get to fix these but what you mean crouches? il fix double ladder but leave the middle one becuse i wanted it to be symitrical. many spawns were used to prevent camping on spawns. and its isnt my 1st map, its my 7th.

Assassin
05-28-2009, 07:05 PM
Great first map I only see 2 major things and that's the double ladders and To many "sniping places". To start out I'd just do 3x1 and 2x2s
6/10