defy's 2nd map

[DefyGravity]

HERE's my 2nd map!
http://i39.tinypic.com/i539n8.jpg

LINK is here if u cant cLhttp://i39.tinypic.com/i539n8.jpg

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RATE or HATE

WHOOPS! I FORGOT TO CHANGE GAME MODE! IT IS AN ASSAULT NOT A DEATHMATCH!

[daridmetch1]

meh.. 5/10
boring falls, userless camping spots, useless spots in all, space tiles wierd (poles), and easy to get to arti besides the base for all campers >.<

EDIT: i also think its poss on bottom left at the ladder u can ladderless to the right and zoom into arti room
so fix that

[DefyGravity]

i am not completely done, but i want some comments. Also, i know that i put some camping spots in pointless places, so dont state this again. Thanks!

[daridmetch1]

i am not completely done, but i want some comments. Also, i know that i put some camping spots in pointless places, so dont state this again. Thanks!

lol.. if u wanna see a couple of my maps to help u on space ill do it =P
and its good ur not completely done because u got some stuff to fix
so yea.. just fix that ladderless and it will be 6/10

[Villyer]

There is a ladderless shortcut.
Really long laders.
Two artis.
The pits with F boxes at the top is bad.
Ladder glitch.
Screen jumps.
Jump from ladder to platform.
Crouch.
Dont think you need so many camping spots.
Bad refill placement.
Bad spawn palcement.



\I suggest you start with smaller maps, instead trying ot make a 3x3.

[daridmetch1]

lol vill ur such a critic... stop criticising this guy and let him fix lol

but yea.. i agreed with everything u said before u said it because... im ghetto and gangsta like that rofl (ps: im also a mind reader :D)

and yea.. work on smaller maps cuz they like 12345678987654321 times better/easier.


*OFF TOPIC* if u do 111,111,111 times 111,111,111 u get 12,345,678,987,654,321
freaky eh?

[Villyer]

lol vill ur such a critic... stop criticising this guy and let him fix lol


*OFF TOPIC* if u do 111,111,111 times 111,111,111 u get 12,345,678,987,654,321
freaky eh?



Yea, i think im getting to strict when i rate maps =/


But to go along with the off topic, any number of 1's squared is counting to that number of 1's, then back to 1.

[xXxduddevixXx]

Uhm your 1st map was better I think..

[NuMbA]

i think you should make TDM's
all your maps look like they could be turned in to one
because its almost symmetrical

[Wannabe]

Plain in some spots...
Really Long Ladders {Get Rid Of them Please}
Camping Spots
No need for two aritfacts
Please Try to make symeterical {Fair on Both Sides}

Over 1.5/5