A Map By Guy (In Progress)

[Guy]

I been going at maps for about 2 weeks
Finally came up with a good map
Trying too get more into map making
And get back into something since 07

Tips/Rate?


http://i40.tinypic.com/2dv0vua.png

[UreOnMyHitList]

This is all my opinion.

http://i44.tinypic.com/soyibq.jpg

Top to bottom.

Remove spawns.

Not a big fan of them boxes in the dirt like that, but it does add a nice touch.

Grass don't grow under ground. Put a urban box there.

Remove the things in the circle, an put the support things.

Move that part one space, you got the room for it.

Grass an trees would not grow on a steel box like that.

In the dark areas put some windows. Make it symmetrical too.

Other then that, not to bad. Like I said above purely my opinion, do what you want.

[KiteRider]

2/5

Junkyard tiles should never touch each other only diagonally.

Most of what Ure said, I agree with.

When using the supports from the industrial tileset though, I find it best to use if, and only if, you're changing backgrounds.

Ladders should nevar touch >.<

Screen jump in the bottom four screens, as well as partykillas. Make that area accessible, probably by going around the top.

Don't like the refill positioning


Too lazy to go in depth >.<

[ShadowReaper9201]

ehh, it is alright.
not really feeling the metal boxes in the dirt.
remove some of the metal boxes and make some those crates that are in between the dirt tiles, make F. basically what UreOnMyHitList said.
2.5/5

[Brandon0104]

This is all my opinion.

http://i44.tinypic.com/soyibq.jpg

Top to bottom.

Remove spawns.

Not a big fan of them boxes in the dirt like that, but it does add a nice touch.

Grass don't grow under ground. Put a urban box there.

Remove the things in the circle, an put the support things.

Move that part one space, you got the room for it.

Grass an trees would not grow on a steel box like that.

In the dark areas put some windows. Make it symmetrical too.

Other then that, not to bad. Like I said above purely my opinion, do what you want.


You seem to be giving him everything on looks, try focusing on gameplay more. He should fix most of that just next time add gameplay issues ;)

1 thing I would really fix is the ladder beside the spawns on the bottom screen. Make it 1 ladder tile bigger so that you
don't have to screen glitch to the top. And make the map symmetrical so that it is equally fair for both teams. Then
make it so refils and ladders aren't touching.

I'm not really a fan of climbing maps. Like in this map on the bottom screen you have to climb up from the middle which would
probably cause camping. Make a few possibilities for people to get up.