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Killerrrrrr
05-20-2009, 03:30 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/mbo2fa.png


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MMT rate with stars ;)

Villyer
05-20-2009, 05:44 PM
Looks ok. Too many refills. And whats the point of the refill in the spawn? There is no way for blue to get there...

Killah
05-20-2009, 05:48 PM
Make blue be able to get into red spawns but don't make it so it's uber spawn camping.
Bit too many refills. -Limit to 3-4
Too much stair gameplay. - Don't put 3 tiles in succession like stairs.
Tight in some areas. -No comment.

You focused too much on looks and their isn't much gameplay.
Work on the gameplay and it'll be a better map.

2.5/5 For now.

SmoothCopyCat
05-20-2009, 08:20 PM
eh..

too many refills..

kinda looks too.. boring..

game play looks good tho..

alittle long..

3/5


i cant rate with starts.. :/

Guy
05-20-2009, 08:33 PM
This map is fun gamplay.
The only fawl is the refills.

SuicideTheory
05-20-2009, 08:40 PM
That map looks sick. (Even though that is my first map i've looked at)

StrikiNinja
05-20-2009, 09:16 PM
The map looks fine, along with gameplay, but the shaping of the tiles looks awkward.

2.9/5

UreOnMyHitList
05-20-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/k1cjso.jpg

Top to bottom:

Blue: Tight with a good camping spot, for blue.

Pink: Possible glitch. Where you jump an shoot to kill. I don't really know though.

Yellow: Point less ladder since you can't make that one jump.

Light Green: Would be nice if it was useful.

Light blue: I'd like to see more of that. Especially if your going to do it once like that.

Red: Kinda flat there.

Not that bad of a map though.

jfella91
05-20-2009, 09:58 PM
Very nice map, I think all of Ure's suggestions should be implemented though to finalize the map, other than that jump shoot glitch one, if it isn't actually a glitch. The gameplay looks like it would be fun and tactical.

JoKeR
05-20-2009, 10:14 PM
Theres only 3 or 5 refills not that many

SuicideTheory
05-20-2009, 10:32 PM
I don't get it.

xXPingXx
05-20-2009, 10:33 PM
I don't like the where the crane lines drop from...
I thought they were supposed to drop down from the
crane tiles :/

its a little plain in the top right too..

useless refill at red spawn :/

Aimhead
05-21-2009, 07:20 AM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/1892/fixxxxx.png

From right to left.
Light green: First two have a terible ladder placement and the third has a glitch.
Pink: Players from the red team would probably go from the top since it's safer and players from the blue team from the bottom. Thus, it could lead to spawn camping on the red base since you got a ladder. Both teams should access both ways.
Blue: "x" = space tile (inside the blue circle )(the left one)
"y" = ground
You got "x" to support "y" (left) but where you got no background there is nothing. I know you can't put "x" where there is no background but "y" looks like it's on the air. You can change the "y" with something like the useless thing on mid/bottom-mid.

Try to find some other places for refils (they are too many, you should use 3-4)

3/5

Maurinho
05-21-2009, 10:42 AM
-_- aim there's not glitchs at blue green w.e u said i forgot. the only glitch i see is one at the left almost just down the blue circle that u put that is the only 1 that i see :|

Aimhead
05-21-2009, 12:12 PM
-_- aim there's not glitchs at blue green w.e u said i forgot. the only glitch i see is one at the left almost just down the blue circle that u put that is the only 1 that i see :|

Yeah there is a glitch at the left light green circle. You don't need the ladder. You just jump and appear at the top. He should remove a block so the ladder is atleast 3blocks long to go to the upper screen.

Brandon0104
05-21-2009, 12:42 PM
Few flaws that bring my rating down like the crane and screen jumping.


http://www.pawngame.com/forum/images/rating/rating_3.gif | 3/5