defygravity's first map

[DefyGravity]

i read map making guide and heres my map
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V2: Yellow highlighted boxes are F tiles
http://i41.tinypic.com/eb7o92.jpg

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[Villyer]

Not too bad for a first map. Im guessing arrows are F?

The middle is all stair gameplay. Bottom is tight, and bottom left has a long crouch. And there are 7 other crouches around the map. Quite a bit of ladders on the outsides. Wasted space. Flat. Gameplay is meh.

But the appearance is pretty good. Usually first maps are terrible with tile choice.


1/5


Try to crop your picture a litle bit next time, so that you can only see the map.

[Guy]

It looks good..
But A lot of crouches
Tight kinda of but
Its really good for your first map.
Nice job :]

[DefyGravity]

shadow, uh, the crouch at the bottom with the arrow box is walk through. Also, i put little bunkers from cold wars, so why does it count as crouch. Yes, the crouch in the bottom for the blues is a tunnel. The spawn crouches, i just thought would be a nice addtion. Thanks for the comments. I will be making a 2nd map soon.:)

[KiteRider]

Looks pretty coo for a first (submitted) map
1/5
-Crouch = Ouch, anytime, anywhere.
-Like Villyer said, stairy gameplay in the middle. Maybe something like the yellow submarine would fit well in the wasted space. It is the docks, no?
-Tight Gameplay
-Screen jumping glitch in right screens. CF tiles should be 4 spaces below the red line to ensure this is not exploitable.
-Diagonally touching blocks = no thank you, encourage camping. If you've played on Cold Front and you'll know what i mean. I ain't a fan of bunkers.

[NuMbA]

could use some work
-take out all crouches
-dont make it too flat
-red spawns should be at the top left
-make the bottom tunnel bigger

1/5 but if you worked on it maybe 4/5

[DefyGravity]

kk. Il get on it. Also, wers the flat area, middle?

[NuMbA]

the bottom
btw can i have the map code?

[Dreams]

Fix the middle stairs, and the crouches at the bottom left screen, then it would be a very good map for a first.

Nice.

[DefyGravity]

the bottom
btw can i have the map code?

il give the code when i am fished updating. Tomorrow, hehe. Can I add platforms and ladders in the middle? I think that would be good. I will also elevate the ocean floor so tunnel can be fixed for elevation. I will also change the spawn crouches to destructible blocks with 100hp. Changing bunkers to reduce camping, instead, making it a bit more flat or filling in the empty spot to make a staircase. I might add more F blocks for hiding if needed. Keep up the comments, so i can improve! Thanx!

[daridmetch1]

eh... gameplay sorta would be wierd
also strange how theres so much water there is.. that stops in middle of ladder and right inf ront of a winder -.-
just try to raise the bottom so theres no crouches and change the blue crouch jump spawn.
other than that i think it is a solid 2/5

[DefyGravity]

Got it... Still working on it though.

[L]

**Flaws**

-Tight around to bottom screens
-Crouching
-A lot of camping on red
-Wasted space
-Red spawns are iffy
-Refill placement

**Note**

One of the red spawns should be moved to the top portion of the base. Should use your space better, and try and make the bottom less cramped, it's way to tight. Your refills should definitely be in different places. Remove the crouching near the red base.

**Rating**

Out of Five: 1/5

Percentage: 26%

[JoKeR]

are you sure thats your very first map...lol..jk
Looks good

[DefyGravity]

thanks guys.

[xXPingXx]

I like it, but the water is eww
couple tight spaces eww
try to zoom in :/ its hard to see everything

[DefyGravity]

k. Il magnify and add v3 tomorrow.

[Maurinho]

I like it u have a lot of imagination anyways I give 2/5 if u fix bottom
will go higher my rate.
:)